Instigator / Pro
5
1378
rating
36
debates
38.89%
won
Topic

Rap Battle

Status
Finished

All stages have been completed. The voting points distribution and the result are presented below.

Arguments points
3
3
Sources points
0
2
Spelling and grammar points
1
1
Conduct points
1
1

With 1 vote and 2 points ahead, the winner is ...

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Parameters
More details
Publication date
Last update date
Category
Music
Time for argument
Three days
Voting system
Open voting
Voting period
Two weeks
Point system
Four points
Rating mode
Rated
Characters per argument
25,000
Contender / Con
7
1641
rating
63
debates
65.08%
won
Description
~ 367 / 5,000

This is my first rap battle, it's just something I wanted to try. Please go easy on me (:

RULES:
Four bars per bar setup. Amount of bar setups doesn't matter, but try to do at least four. No plagiarism.

RULES FOR VOTERS:
Criteria:

Arguments - Who you think won
Sources - Better rhymes
Spelling & Grammar - Better flow
Conduct - Which opponent was more creative

Added:
Criterion
Pro
Tie
Con
Points
Better arguments
3 point(s)
Better sources
2 point(s)
Better spelling and grammar
1 point(s)
Better conduct
1 point(s)
Reason:

To be honest, there was not a lot in here to separate the two of you. I don’t think either side really edged out the other, the flow and creativity were about the same, I didn’t think either side was particularly great; there was a lot of build up in the rhymes, but. It a forceful follow through. Each line needs to be building up to a specific punchline, and I didn’t really think either side did great here.

The only thing that really separates either side was that while the level of rhymes was similar; con had fewer rhyme fizzles that didn’t work out, as a result;,8’ going to award rhymes to con.