Instigator / Pro
25
1476
rating
16
debates
40.63%
won
Topic
#1112

Rap Battle Part 3

Status
Finished

The debate is finished. The distribution of the voting points and the winner are presented below.

Winner & statistics
Better arguments
12
12
Better sources
6
8
Better legibility
4
4
Better conduct
3
3

After 5 votes and with 2 points ahead, the winner is...

Speedrace
Tags
Parameters
Publication date
Last updated date
Type
Standard
Number of rounds
5
Time for argument
Three days
Max argument characters
10,000
Voting period
One month
Point system
Multiple criterions
Voting system
Open
Contender / Con
27
1641
rating
63
debates
65.08%
won
Description

***Rules for my opponent***
Spit 16 bars for each round. It's okay if it is a little more or a little less but try your best to make it at least 16. This rap battle will be judged off of 4 criteria: Rhymes, flow, syllabic pattern, and creativity.
Rhymes - Who had better and more rhymes.
Flow - Who had better flow.
Syllabic pattern - When the syllables are perfectly in sync each line, especially the last word of each bar.
Creativity - Which opponent had more creative bars.

***Rules for voters***
Since this is a rap battle, I'd like to take a different approach and make the judging more accurate and fair. As I've said before, 4 of each criteria will be voted for. You must vote in this fashion below:
Arguments - Better Rhymes.
Sources - Better Flow.
Spelling & Grammar - Better Syllabic pattern.
Conduct - Which opponent was more creative.

If you don't follow the voting method above, your vote will be insufficient.

I will explain my bars in the comments if need be, so the voters (and perhaps my opponent) can understand them.

No forfeits. If you accept the rap battle, then participate.

Lol here we go again.

I will leave a good vote on this one as it was a good battle.

*R5 bars explanation*

Word game scheme
1. If I exchange words with friends it'll be an end to your puzzle | Words With Friends
2. puzzle
3. Plus it "boggles" my mind | The game Boggle
4. I get the word my team fingers move, but we not playing ruzzle | Ruzzle

1. If it's war, I call my partner in crime, thats my PNC | Partner = P in = N crime = C
2. Invite him in (vitamin) your house with the iron, no GNC | GNC vitamin company.
Invite him in/vitamin wordplay
Iron = gun
Iron = vitamin
3. I'll show you how I incorporate punches, INC | INC is the abbreviation for incorporate/incorporation

*R4 bars explanation*

Or I'll put the steel in your mouth like an aftertaste
1. Steel in your mouth = gun in your mouth (gun being made out of steel)
2. Wordplay on steel and still. = Still in your mouth. This explains "aftertaste"
Double ent./Wordplay

When the K even with your heart, who gone ride along?
1. K or (AK) = a type of gun. K pointed at your heart.
2. K even = 'Kevin' and heart = 'Hart'. Kevin Hart was in the movie "Ride Along", that's where it comes from.
Wordplay

My bars are Kardashian surgeons they change faces
1. The Kardashians, such as Kim Kardashian has plastic surgery.
2. My bars change faces = My bars are so tight that it will change your facial expressions.
Double entendre

*R1 bars explanation*

I'm embarrassing you bad here in the net like the lunch lady
1. here in the net (internet)
2. here (hair) in the net [hair net]. lunch ladies wear hair nets.

Well what I'm toting will knock you a** to Venezuela
1. Used Venezuela as a reference to my country scheme at very beginning of rap

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@Speedrace

Just letting you know I will be using the same bars I used in my "rap battle part 3" in R1 since I basically wasted bars for no reason because my opponent decided to forfeit and concede. So I will re-use my bars that I had before in round 1 (just in case you happen to notice that battle before). My opponent never participated and I requested for the debate to get deleted. I slightly changed the bars but not much. Good luck

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@King_8

Just like old daaaaays my dude