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#1112

Rap Battle Part 3

Status

Finished

The debate is finished. The distribution of the voting points and the winner are presented below.

Winner & statistics

Better arguments

Better sources

Better legibility

Better conduct

After 5 votes and with 2 points ahead, the winner is...

Speedrace

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Publication date: 06.27.2019 02:22PM
Last updated date: 08.14.2019 03:26AM
Type: Standard
Number of rounds: 5
Time for argument: Three days
Max argument characters: 10,000
Voting period: One month
Point system: Multiple criterions
Voting system: Open

Contender / Con

Speedrace

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Description

***Rules for my opponent***
Spit 16 bars for each round. It's okay if it is a little more or a little less but try your best to make it at least 16. This rap battle will be judged off of 4 criteria: Rhymes, flow, syllabic pattern, and creativity.
Rhymes - Who had better and more rhymes.
Flow - Who had better flow.
Syllabic pattern - When the syllables are perfectly in sync each line, especially the last word of each bar.
Creativity - Which opponent had more creative bars.

***Rules for voters***
Since this is a rap battle, I'd like to take a different approach and make the judging more accurate and fair. As I've said before, 4 of each criteria will be voted for. You must vote in this fashion below:
Arguments - Better Rhymes.
Sources - Better Flow.
Spelling & Grammar - Better Syllabic pattern.
Conduct - Which opponent was more creative.

If you don't follow the voting method above, your vote will be insufficient.

I will explain my bars in the comments if need be, so the voters (and perhaps my opponent) can understand them.

No forfeits. If you accept the rap battle, then participate.

Round 1

King_8

06.30.2019 03:28AM

Pro

I'm hungry (Hungary) for this money so this Turkey could wait for peace
But I ran (Iran) for a rack (Iraq) of lamb and left nothing but grease (Greece)
And I ain't tryna (China) rush ya' (Russia) but trust, the hype is real (Isreal)
Your girl hop on my pole and (Poland) she likes the feel

Creative King using countries in my bars, my lyrics are crazy
I'm embarrassing you bad here in the net like the lunch lady

Your little elementary school bars will never faze me

You think you got the upper hand? Yes, no or maybe

I heard you out here snitching, you been a teller
Well what I'm toting will knock you a** to Venezuela
Y'all ain't seen a pump this special since Cinderella
Act tough, I'll leave you in a raw state like salmonella

But since you want to step on toes, Ima tag it
Have your earth tilting from going rounds, that's an axis
This gone be my second win here, getting the W2 like taxes
As far as rapping goes, we're in totally different brackets

Speedrace

07.03.2019 03:21AM

Con

It's King_8, he always brings the heat

You were my first battle but were easily beat

Be home by dark, you don't wanna see me in the street

If you wanna keep your arms, hands, legs, and feet

You can't rhyme, going "lady" with "crazy?"

That's just a sign of someone who's lazy

Who won our first battle? My memory's hazy

Psyche, it was me! Fresh like a daisy

You've done 9 debates and only won 4

And can bet you that you won't get anymore

I see you on the ground while I can fly and soar

You try to leave the house but catch your fingers in the door

It is pretty clear who the superior is

You're like a padawan, I'm the rapping whiz

You're failing this like you didn't study for a quiz

I'm just super mystical, call me the wiz!

Round 2

King_8

07.03.2019 06:39AM

Pro

Your style too bland, while I got all the flavor

Need help with bars? I got all the tips like a proud waiter

One tray coming your way to serve you, I'll cater

And everything I write is the bomb I'm Al Qaeda

Using daisies in your raps? This ain't a bouquet

I'll start dunking over your head like a game of 2K

I stay fly and too quick, I'm like a blue jay

You stepping up to me again will be doomsday

I got the same damn strategy, same mentality

Same sh-t apply to any lame tryna battle me

Couple shots sent your way for even @'ing me

Keep acting charged up, and Ima catch a battery

That red dot will make him pause like a stop light

You don't own heat so I know you don't hold the glock right

You walking straight to your death, you not too bright

My bars are locked security, b*tch I'm top flight

Speedrace

07.06.2019 03:44AM

Con

Your bars are flopping like a fish out the sea
Learn how to swim, you’re just treading currently
You’re tuna for a shark, I’ll get you with my teeth
You wanna win this battle? Then you’ll have to go through me

Rhyming “flavor” and “waiter?” Someone needs sleep
Stretching that line must’ve been quite a leap!
This’ll be easy, with you, the floor I’ll sweep
And please prepare your eyes because they are about to weep

You gon’ catch a battery? I’m pure electricity
I’m your new master, so please learn some complicity
I win AP battles all day long, doesn’t matter your ethnicity
I do it succinctly, all about that simplicity!

You made this battle, but I clicked accept
You must’ve been up all night, I really hope you slept!
Your world turned upside down when, on this stage, I stepped
So get out right now, the floor as been swept

Round 3

King_8

07.06.2019 04:41AM

Pro

When it comes to which one of us has the better bars, it's not even debatable

You rhymed "sea" and "currently", I analyzed your bars and I swear I hate you

Because you put words together like a 2nd grader do

But you swear nobody is as hot as you - how? When sh-t don't rhyme and it's not the truth

I used your bars as examples of what not to do cause it's just like you're getting assistance from Dr. Seuss

I have a set of people to kill, now God chose you

But you won't be the last, other comp' gotta go too

Be alarmed, cause you got a prob if you in my scope, fool

I'm putting numbers in boxes without playing Sudoku

I got a team blue jerseys ready for action

Bullets surrounding you like a distraction

Pay attention I'm coaching now, got weapons off the bench

This gun I'm carrying, I blast it if I'm in a pinch

I tell em line up, this game will be easy, no sweat

We out the huddle with shotguns aiming at your chest

I'll have 5 dudes go right, and 6 dudes go left

And start to bang, I'm just saying, everybody I coach wrecks

Speedrace

07.09.2019 03:09AM

Con

You lost your rhythm and you still can’t rhyme
You think that you can beat me in my prime?
On our first battle you stole a whole line!
You were beaten so badly that you committed a crime! **

You’re not a king, change the name to peasant
That has a nice ring, I’m sure you’ll find it pleasant
You’re up against a hawk as a little tiny pheasant
I’ll always beat you, past, future, and present

I’ve never got anything against a black brother
But how can I respect someone who isn’t anything other
than a little boy who was coddled by his mother
I’ve already whipped you twice, do you really want another?

The only way you’ll win is from a vote bomb
So breath, stay quiet, and please stay calm
Just leave behind your pride, I think that’s a psalm
Concede me the win and I’ll have won this qualm

** that was true by the way https://www.debate.org/debates/Rap-Battle/339/

Round 4

King_8

07.09.2019 03:47AM

Pro

You always post your round at the last minute;

You better be careful before it's too late

Or I'll put the steel in your mouth like an aftertaste

Scared to rap cause you know I'm the wrong one to face

My flow is chemical compound heavy like toxic waste

I'll let that thing ring non stop like a missed call

I hit the bail, rip the scale and measure where this b*tch fall

Pissed off, clips toss, let off an explosion

And Ima send them shells back out to sea like erosion

It's real people and there's fake people, which side you on

Automatic or the revolver pick which firearm

Think you got this win in the bag? Nah, you wrong

When the K even with your heart, who gone ride along?

Our minds work differently, we in two separate places

No room for squares in my circle, we can't shape-shift

The lyrics that I spit could make me famous

My bars are Kardashian surgeons they change faces

Speedrace

07.12.2019 03:28AM

Con

I post at the last minute 'cause I'm busy climbing higher

Can't say the same for you because your situation's dire

Your covered in my burns; can't escape my rap fire

You wanna leave this alive? Get on a knee and say "sire"

Your bars are surgeons? Then fix your beat

Without a tempo how can you expect to defeat

This flowing rhythm I so effortlessly excrete

I'm driving this debate, stay in the backseat

Talking about guns, is your mind in one place?

Always drifting to violence, you need to get a pace

If you expect to get away from me and my chase

But it's already too late, I always win the race

I don't need a gun to take you down

If you escape my fire then you'll simply drown

Can't live with my rules? Get out of my town

As long as I'm here, I'll always hold the crown

Round 5

King_8

07.12.2019 03:39AM

Pro

You better watch your mouth or it'll get muzzled

If I exchange words with friends it'll be an end to your puzzle

Plus it boggles my mind how you think you can tussle

I get the word my team fingers move, but we not playing ruzzle

If it's war, I call my partner in crime, thats my PNC

Invite him in (vitamin) your house with the iron, no GNC

Keep up with the tough talk & your death will be on NBC

I'll show you how I incorporate punches, INC

Ima let my gun peek at you (Pikachu)

Bullets burn you to a char, man the (Charmander) outcome is lethal

That squirt'll (Squirtle) hit your people too

But I ain't tryna make em stretch and fall

Cause I'm airing pokemon clips I wanna see him catch em all

With this rap sh*t on this website, I'd say I'm the best

Every battle I flip, not one flop from me yet

My street status is good on every block they respect

Thought you had your cards together but you got decked

Thanks for the rap battle

Speedrace

07.15.2019 03:26AM

Con

#10

You’ve come all this way, can’t you take a hint?
You lack rhyme, rhythm, and simply talent
I get down, set go, take off at a sprint
When you leave this battle you’ll be in a splint

You say you’re the best, I say that’s subjective
Destroying you is my objective
You try a dragon move, but it’s defective
I go water to Charmander, super effective!

Always up for violence, what about the youth?
The way that you talk is really uncouth
Don’t get anyone into that booth
You’re creepy, please leave; it’s simply the truth

I was on DART for just months; already in top ten
You’ve been on for awhile, but what’s your rank again?
Oh, it’s lower than me? Well I’m scratching my chin
It’s simply not a question; you lose, I win

King_8

07.15.2019 05:01AM

Lol here we go again.

RationalMadman

07.15.2019 03:28AM

I will leave a good vote on this one as it was a good battle.

King_8

07.12.2019 03:49AM

*R5 bars explanation*

Word game scheme
1. If I exchange words with friends it'll be an end to your puzzle | Words With Friends
2. puzzle
3. Plus it "boggles" my mind | The game Boggle
4. I get the word my team fingers move, but we not playing ruzzle | Ruzzle

1. If it's war, I call my partner in crime, thats my PNC | Partner = P in = N crime = C
2. Invite him in (vitamin) your house with the iron, no GNC | GNC vitamin company.
Invite him in/vitamin wordplay
Iron = gun
Iron = vitamin
3. I'll show you how I incorporate punches, INC | INC is the abbreviation for incorporate/incorporation

King_8

07.09.2019 03:59AM

*R4 bars explanation*

Or I'll put the steel in your mouth like an aftertaste
1. Steel in your mouth = gun in your mouth (gun being made out of steel)
2. Wordplay on steel and still. = Still in your mouth. This explains "aftertaste"
Double ent./Wordplay

When the K even with your heart, who gone ride along?
1. K or (AK) = a type of gun. K pointed at your heart.
2. K even = 'Kevin' and heart = 'Hart'. Kevin Hart was in the movie "Ride Along", that's where it comes from.
Wordplay

My bars are Kardashian surgeons they change faces
1. The Kardashians, such as Kim Kardashian has plastic surgery.
2. My bars change faces = My bars are so tight that it will change your facial expressions.
Double entendre

King_8

06.30.2019 03:32AM

*R1 bars explanation*

I'm embarrassing you bad here in the net like the lunch lady
1. here in the net (internet)
2. here (hair) in the net [hair net]. lunch ladies wear hair nets.

Well what I'm toting will knock you a** to Venezuela
1. Used Venezuela as a reference to my country scheme at very beginning of rap

King_8

06.30.2019 03:18AM

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@Speedrace

Just letting you know I will be using the same bars I used in my "rap battle part 3" in R1 since I basically wasted bars for no reason because my opponent decided to forfeit and concede. So I will re-use my bars that I had before in round 1 (just in case you happen to notice that battle before). My opponent never participated and I requested for the debate to get deleted. I slightly changed the bars but not much. Good luck

Speedrace

06.29.2019 12:59PM

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@King_8

Just like old daaaaays my dude

Gatorade

08.14.2019 12:52AM

Criterion

Pro

Tie

Con

Points

Better arguments

3 point(s)

Better sources

2 point(s)

Better legibility

1 point(s)

Better conduct

1 point(s)

Reason:

CVB for pinkfreud08, offering explanations is not poor conduct, he is explaining the lyrics in the rap.

Pinkfreud08

08.11.2019 07:29PM

Criterion

Pro

Tie

Con

Points

Better arguments

3 point(s)

Better sources

2 point(s)

Better legibility

1 point(s)

Better conduct

1 point(s)

Reason:

Pro tried to cheat in the comment section by offering explanations, that's poor conduct!

Ramshutu

07.20.2019 06:18PM

Criterion

Pro

Tie

Con

Points

Better arguments

3 point(s)

Better sources

2 point(s)

Better legibility

1 point(s)

Better conduct

1 point(s)

Reason:

Counting the ridiculous vote of clout02.

Clout02

07.20.2019 05:38PM

Criterion

Pro

Tie

Con

Points

Better arguments

3 point(s)

Better sources

2 point(s)

Better legibility

1 point(s)

Better conduct

1 point(s)

Reason:

Countering Ragnar's poor vote because it is not cheating to explain your raps in the comment section. The purpose is for people to understand them as they case their votes.

Barney

07.16.2019 06:12AM

Criterion

Pro

Tie

Con

Points

Better arguments

3 point(s)

Better sources

2 point(s)

Better legibility

1 point(s)

Better conduct

1 point(s)

Reason:

As a non-moderated non-debate, I'm just giving a conduct penalty for pro attempting to cheat in the comment section.

I am marking this as sources instead of conduct to honor the request of pro, that interruptions to flow be deducted on sources, to which this conduct violation most closely resembles within the paradigm. ... Additionally (would not be enough for the point by itself), con made good use of a source to bolster his case (it enhanced the burn, even while not needing to be understood in the middle of his argument).