DapperMack came back to fight the fact that he ain't got nothing on me
I'll give you an L in a box and then ship it in flight under the tree
Backbreaking rhymes like I'm Johny Knox
Heartbreaking tragedy as a whole, a spotty white boy with the chickenpox
Bro, I'll sell your soul into the market in Seoul for one hundred racks
Here's the whole tea, saltier than the Dead Sea, pay up your tax
Bowling with me, I'll always hit a strike in the lane
Stay in your lane, this game washed you up and now you are in vain, going insane
I regen like I'm Jesus Christ
Runnin this shit like a GTA Heist
You're an intolerable quarterback audible
My flow is comfy, its fucking hospitable
How bout you go on the forum
And improve your verbatim
The forums they disapprove of your ineptitude
Your rhymes are only the quorum, I am an earthquake of large magnitude
I got Free Hulu, just not for you
Missing pigmentation of a color hue
Might be more toxic than shippers of cartoons
Starco, Mordegret, pathetic bafoons
You're like is full of regret
You must be Drake, you're upset
A horny little creature like the Blizerian family
Corny lines will make you bleed out externally
I'll issue an apology signes for your medical bill, formally
My last name comes from Greek loyalty
The world is a bit skeptical
I'm just not sold you can point the dagger at me from a vertical
You're not a rough and tough cowboy
You're a Lil Nas X type, a fake cowboy ploy
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Winner ✔ ✗ ✗ 1 point
Reason:
RE: supadudz v dappermack
dudz rhymed some lines; dap blanked out back
just quietly full forfeited
it's fair to say mack horseshitted
Rofl! It was indeed a deep rap.
I got to say, your vote caused me to look on con's case again, and in retrospect there was a depth of soul revealed... So in retrospect:
Actually I quite liked it. I thought that some of the metaphysical imagery was really particularly effective. Interesting rhythmic devices too, which seemed to counterpoint the surrealism of the underlying metaphor of the humanity of the poet's compassionate soul, which contrives through the medium of the verse structure to sublimate this, transcend that, and come to terms with the fundamental dichotomies of the other, and one is left with a profound and vivid insight into whatever it was the poem was about!
Lol
Thats going in the iconic quotes
id love to see rm vote
Free votes
Full forefeit