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Topic
#552

Ramshutu vs RationalMadman Rap Battle

Status
Finished

The debate is finished. The distribution of the voting points and the winner are presented below.

Winner & statistics
Winner
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After 3 votes and with 2 points ahead, the winner is...

RationalMadman
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Publication date
Last updated date
Type
Standard
Number of rounds
4
Time for argument
Three days
Max argument characters
7,500
Voting period
Two weeks
Point system
Winner selection
Voting system
Open
Contender / Con
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1687
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Description

Full on Rap Battle. 4 rounds. No rules.

Insults are expected, this is a rap battle. Whoever has the bet rhymes, insults and flow will be declared the winner.

Good luck to both competitors.

Bump!

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@Ramshutu

I think if the flow was better you would have won

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@Vader

Thanks for taking the time and effort to vote, I appreciate the feedback. :)

ty for the vote and advice supa

I don't know if I can rap. Both did well.

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@RationalMadman

I also know you’ve got better things to do, but if you did have time for your own critique, it would be appreciated.

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@PsychometricBrain

I think Rationals done this enough that I’m sure I have no chance of beating him on those sorts of technical points - like I said I have almost 0 rap experience or even that much exposure - I was going for trying to be purely entertaining, smart and funny. I’m personally judging myself on how smart my insults were, as long as people appreciated them, and whether I entertained people who read them, that’s all I can really expect out of this.

Plus - having voted on 156 debates thus far - there is literally not a single person on this site I haven’t alienated, which doesn’t help my cause :)

“The greater the artist, the greater the doubt. Perfect confidence is granted to the less talented as a consolation prize."
- Robert Hughes

I expect only to come back wiser and stronger later on.

I expect no mercy from voters who can't understand what I wrote or find it displeasing to their brains to read

that is fine, i will adapt to the stupidity of the readers as I endure defeats and am sure a more evolved style will fail to impress. Until then, I'll stick to this.

I didn't actually notice that. That's another reason why you should try to keep it a little more concise, there are 44 words between "might devote" and "buy some rope" which makes the rhyme quite imperceptible

might devote

buy some rope lycanthrope

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@PsychometricBrain

they rhyme inside

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@RationalMadman
@Ramshutu

I've only read the first rounds of this rap battle so far but Pro's disses are solid, I loved
"He’s gunna trying to make this into a dick waving contest.
Sorry bro, waving? you’ll just be jiggling at best."
and
"Forget mental heavyweights chumps like Einstein, newton or even Forrest fucking Gump.
If I wanted to find his equal, I’d pull my pants down and take a dump. "
But Con's got to work on his flow, solid considering that this is his first rap battle though, might read the rest later and leave some feedback.

I liked your pony with a saddle/your mother with a paddle line. However, you're sacrificing the flow by having lines that include more than 50 words like
"Is that your ambition is just fiction, you’re not on a mission but addiction and just might devote your whole life into being a bystander while your ass is handed to ya’ when you try penetrate my defences; drown in your own juice, pussy, how you like my Viking moat?" ryhmed with "Suck my blood? Dumbfuck, I appear to be a vampire, come and buy some rope, you didn’t suck your own kind, even the disguise you failed to fall for’s a lie but you’ll die as I’m a Lycanthrope". They're 88 words combined...

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@Type1

Thanks for you vote! Though I am mildly disgruntled at not getting a perfect 4/4 for diss :)

DDO is debate.org

Made a few S&G errors in R5 but I guess it's obvious, actually some words missed out together make each other flow better. missed a 'me' here and 'are' or something but whatever, it was a closing Round, the others shine through better that was just showing off flow and punchlines.

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@Ramshutu

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqyRjXYqQDo

I did actually use 'is that' twice. whatever. Still dope enough.

"The thing" and "is that" are linked. It makes sense when you sit back and read it slower.

I realise it can be confusing where 'is that' came from in a faster reading.

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@Ramshutu

You can insult me harsher, I will insult you better.

Rap is an art, not just a science. It's kind of like playing against a math genius in poker, you start to realise that they have tendencies and are assuming you do too. So you use their accurate reads against them by out-thinking the maths and entering psychology and how dumb they think you are.

You may be smarter than me, you may insult harsher than me, but your flow and metaphorical-stacking as well as just pure beauty of the punchlines and how the build-up to them was... It won't be as elegant as mine and that's why I'll win.

I don't care if you call me mentally ill, I agreed to 'no rules' in the debate description. I will win, regardless and match your style (and then counter it).

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@RationalMadman

Any limits you want on disses and insults?