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1402
rating
44
debates
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Topic
#689

Rappp Battle

Status
Finished

The debate is finished. The distribution of the voting points and the winner are presented below.

Winner & statistics
Better arguments
9
6
Better sources
4
4
Better legibility
3
2
Better conduct
3
2

After 4 votes and with 5 points ahead, the winner is...

Wrick-It-Ralph
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Parameters
Publication date
Last updated date
Type
Standard
Number of rounds
3
Time for argument
Three days
Max argument characters
30,000
Voting period
One week
Point system
Multiple criterions
Voting system
Open
Contender / Con
14
1687
rating
555
debates
68.11%
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Description

Arguments = Opinion
Sources = Puns, Metaphor, Wordplay.
Grammar = Rhymes per word on average.
Conduct = Any References to Oneself or opponent.

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@oromagi

this guy gets me, lol.

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@Melcharaz

duly noted. I am switching things up when I can. I just want to make sure that when I do it, it's for artistic reasons and not "merely" a voter appeal. So arbitrary switch = bad and style based switch = good and if those are both true then = good.

Rap logic :)

Thanks for the critiques.

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@Wrick-It-Ralph

Alrighty, but don't be afraid to try new stuff! voters can adapt.

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@Melcharaz

I do that sometimes. My prewritten raps look more like strings of rapid rhymes.

One of my things is that I like to build up a story to tell and that forces me to cut back on the rhymes a bit.

Another part of my format as audience consideration. I want it to be easy to read.

Honestly, it doesn't matter how the words are blocked out per se. I made that example in a rap battle against RM actually. His rhymes are more or less structured like mine with two key differences.

A) He puts whole stanzas in a giant string of one or two lines.

B) He doesn't have any standards for a rhyme scheme per se and just kind of spits and plops rhymes down to fit his taste.

I know my stuff looks like I'm just writing stuff and plopping rhymes at the end, but I can assure you that's not always the case. Yes, I do that when I'm story telling my rap, but I also do it knowing in advance which words I want to rhyme and I try to set the story up to compliment those rhymes.

But I can also go the other way just as easily.

For example
"You're-blaming-and-flaming-the-voters-while-claiming-that-we-must-be-insane-to-not-accept-your-reign-and-hopping-on-the-train-of-RM-feigning-fame-retaining-off-your-name-while-failing-what-a-shame."

This was from my most recent battle that I'm still in with RM. I do a long string of rhymes, but notice how I still try to have a theme behind the rhymes. This is key for me personally because I like to tell stories and I mostly rap for my subjective enjoyment, although I love crowds too :)

But yeah, I just wanted to cover that because I think people think I don't mix it up just because I format my bars. I do that to make it easy for the voters to read and for me to reread. With that said. I am slave to certain patterns that's not an arbitrary critique that the voters have been giving. I consider it duly.

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@Wrick-It-Ralph

Don't be afraid to mix it up! you make rhymes within the sentence structure as well as at the end of it. Example

Tony chewed up the boy like pepperoni and started dissing on his ability
Reconstructing arguments in the events of mitigated liability

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@Ramshutu

I guess I'm losing my new rapper smell, lol. thanks for the votes as always.

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@Wrick-It-Ralph

thanks

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@David

solid counterbomb. respect

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@David

Please cvb Type1 so he can do it on his alt?

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@RationalMadman

conspiracy theories are fun.

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@Wrick-It-Ralph

LOL!

After reading your rap. I am now convinced that Type 1 is your alt account.

and Boolean I guess

I speak, English, Spanish, and elephant.

LOL!!!!!!!!!

I don't speak html

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G-E_p3Kc3Yk

Man, you repeat your words too much, lol. That's at least the third time you've said herbivore. I guess it makes sense, you kind of blew all your material rapping me.

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@RationalMadman

I usually don't like to brag, but I went ham that time. :)

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@RationalMadman

Typo. Line 13. Meant to say "Before I'm done having my fun"

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@RationalMadman

Typo, Line 7 Meant to be "lack of style". although it almost still works, lol. I should have tried to play it off.