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1540
rating
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debates
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Topic
#79

Rap Battle 1 (FreeStyle)

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Finished

The debate is finished. The distribution of the voting points and the winner are presented below.

Winner & statistics
Better arguments
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6
Better sources
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4
Better legibility
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2
Better conduct
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2

After 2 votes and with 14 points ahead, the winner is...

Type1
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Publication date
Last updated date
Type
Standard
Number of rounds
4
Time for argument
Three days
Max argument characters
30,000
Voting period
One week
Point system
Multiple criterions
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Open
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14
1266
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119
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Reporting TwoMan's vote, insufficent RFD

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@RationalMadman

Why do you want me to unblock you? So that you can argue with me and leave paticularly wankeresque comments from time to time?

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@RationalMadman

That's true, but I tend to have better hard hitting verses...

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@Type1
@Vader

Please unblock me, Type1.

Supa it probably is also an age thing. When I was 15 I was much less lethal and flawless of a rapper and debater than I am now. Give it time and let your brain mature, puberty and general biochemical changes will make you a smarter guy in your 20s.

Wow, I actually performed like shit...

Reading it over, I don't what I was doing. I would've easily gave you the win here, I don't think it was a clean sweep, I still think it wasn't a close race...

I got really fucked over by my bio here. It was supposed to be a joke that ended up fucking me over. I tried to the play, no bio, boring game, which the judge ended up liking.

I do agree with the judge, I wasn't able to seperate the rap battle self from my regular self, and I felt like I was just RiceGumming myself up a lot.

I think I should read the args better and see how deep I can dive
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To Judge:
RFD was accurate and fair. Exaggerated to some extent, but wouldn't report vote because of it

I do Round 4 was my strongest round unlike the way you phrased is as "me being angry". If you clearly say that I need to find my self, then rage is where it goes and fast rap is what I was trying to go for, but I don't seem to think you picked that up

He still won round 4, but not by landslide you thought
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GG to the opponent, I will be posting a new rap challenge soon, so please TypeOne, do not accept and give someone else a try

[REASON FOR DECISION PART 1]
I'm just handing 7 points to the winner as I believe that will become the meta voting system of rap battles and the contestant who replied to me said do what I want.

Let's be clear here, this wasn't even close. Type1 won. It is apparent to me that SupaDudz is not able to separate his true self from his rap battle self. Your rap battle self has to be a merciless tyrant to the motherfucking core of its being. It can have no morals short of not being a snitch. You are not a human when you rap battle, not if you're doing it right... You're a monstrosity that none can decimate... You are Satan with the powers of God.

Type 1 slips in with the most brutal of opening bar line I've seen in a rap battle in a while:

You're nothing but a botched abortion
caught in the common thought distortion

OHHHHH IT’S ON but admittedly I didn’t quite get what the diss was about because The Last Jedi isn’t exactly regarded as a terrible movie by general consensus so I feel it’s too specialist of a diss for a mainstream site like this where barely anyone is a Star Wars specialist.

[REASON FOR DEBATING PART 2]
Compare this to the opening of SupaDudz:

Have you seen a man by the name of TypeOne?
Because ever since I beat the man he disappeared into the sun

Not only does he stop the rhyme scheme there… It’s kind of like what? Bit over the top in metaphor and lacking in sting.

Let’s move onto the highlights now.

SupaDudz stood out to me here:

His conspiracy theories are more fake
Than Kevin Durant, what a snake

Stalk my profile? I see how it is
My life's more interesting, yours is as boring as a quiz.
That girl I tried to kiss
Thankfully it was a miss

Continues the stringing of the diss in the next stanza:

Bring up the bios, that's an interesting game
Yours is like your mantle, empty and always the same.
Have you ever thought about cleaning sh*t
Because your rhymes are the epitome of it

[REASON FOR DECISION PART 3]

Supa’s entire R3 was clearly him being angry and hurt at how brutal Type1 was being but the issue is that he wasn’t being brutal back he was tryharding to be SMART rather than MERCILESS and this was his fatal error. His entire R3 reads like a person new to rap and incapable of losing their need to seem human and kind limiting their rap battle persona.

Now for Type 1’s highlights… The entire thing had impeccable flow but he needs to work on his creativity. He’s improved a lot since I first battled him on CreateDebate and I commend him for it. He has definitely benefitted a lot from me introducing him to ‘smooth flow’ type rappers whereas he prefers ‘machine gun flow’ rappers by and large and it hurt his elegance in rapping which clearly he’s smoothed out.

Here is the best of Type1 in my eyes:

You're just a teenage
ween mage
still in your minecraft phase
who can't get your ass laid(1)
I'm past that stage
I've outgrown my past ways
I disappeared into the sun to blast rays
at SupaDudz in a glass maze
that magnifies the light and starts a vast blaze
that incinerates him, then I'll flick him in the ash tray

^ Excellent Stanza/verse. I was shocked at how well he did this. Note: It only rhymes if you read it in American accent so don’t read it in your own accent if not from a North American nation as the vowels will likely not rhyme such as ‘blast rays’ not rhyming with ‘ass laid’ and minecraft phast’ if you have a typical European or ANY Asian accent (or any African and/or Aussie/NZ for that matter).

[REASON FOR DECISION PART 4]

Anyways, let’s move along it’s just that you need to bare in mind the accent as Type1 extremely flows well in an American accent but quite terribly if you read it in your own voice if you’re from the other ones as he exploits the ‘a’ and ‘o’ variant in American accent a lot to make what would be tarnished flows in other accents.

Let’s continue:

It's true, I am decayed, something loathsome to dread
but my tomb empty, cause' I rose from the dead
I'm a wraith that incants hexes as I flow from the head
when you're fifty one, you'll still have brought no one to bed

^ Epic comeback, he could not have executed this better other than added lines and more puns in them in the middle to extend it to an 8 line Stanza instead.

If I fought Rey
I'd saute'
the little thot, glaze
her and make her cosplay
as a ham on a hot tray
the plot saved
her every time she got played
she never earned her place at the top they
made her a Marry Sue, so stop say-
-ing the shit that you say, Sasuke

^ The accent he is rapping in would pronounce the name Sauce-kay which is totally incorrect as the undeniable correct annunciation is Sass (*twitch the tongue to extend the s as it fades*)- keh

[REASON FOR DECISION PART 5]

Anyway:

I'm not Jesus, nor Yezus nor lead
I'm a cyanide breathing octo-shark with a dragon's head
you don't like big words? then I'll call you a fag instead
how can you think a bit of vocab is neg-
-ative as an attribute to have, it says
that you probably haven't read
since your mommy had to tuck your illiterate ass in bed

HOT DAMN this had it all, it had metaphor building (albeit barely) and smoothly goes to any vicious beat. It’s fucking brilliant and harsh too, this one stings for the opponent and is why the opponent became so infuriated and hurt by Round 4.

my masks?
Majora and Darth Nihilus both gave me half
so I could craft
the most evil mask at last
now a tentacle shoots from my face fast
and rapes fifteen year old girls in the ass

WOWOWOWOW This is referring back to the Star Wars diss from a whole Round or two before that (Rey is from Star Wars so it’s both).

I'm an evil genius
you're a weasel fetus
with a needle penis
your flow is more stale than dried out fecal pieces
catch some lethal breezes
of Zyklon-B, I'll breathe it
seamlessly, while you bleed from your weenus

HOLY FUCK THIS IS BRUTAL AND FLOWS SO GOOD and even better? It refers to himself earlier saying he’s a “I'm a cyanide breathing octo-shark with a dragon's head” as Zyklon-B is what cyanide is based on. Oh my fucking god this was incredible.

Keep up this stuff FM.

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@RationalMadman

Whatever you think is the most honest, most correct way to vote.

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@Type1
@Vader

Do you want 3 or all 7 points to go to the one I vote the winner?

Since im special

Pearl(the girl we are referring too)
Yezus(jesus but the kanye way)

Im an idiot again

(0) It's a drug, bad drug
(1) Derrick Rose was a NBA player who won 2011 MVP, the youngest ever at 21, his career fell after tearing his ACL

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@DieserDeutscheKerl

Meant more for rap

Lol I think it would be a major hyperbole to call TypeOne the king of this site.

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SupaDudz says The Last Jedi is his favorite movie.

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SupaDudz talks about minecraft and wanting to kiss girls on his profile

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Marc Tresman was the Chicago Bears head coach for 2 season, the 2013-14 and the 2014-15 NFL Season. He was fired for his constant losing record