My Girlfriend's Christmas Gift

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So I was writing a song for my girlfriend(yes I'm a musician) for Christmas. It usually takes me a matter of hours(or less) to write a song, but I've been working on this one for months because I want it to be my best work, and be perfect. The problem is, I failed to complete it in time. I've never tried to express a love this powerful with words, so I'm having trouble with the lyrics(which is very odd for me, because I'm usually quite good with lyrics and poetry). However, the instrumental has been done for quite a while. Have a listen:


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Very Christmassy!
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My belated Christmas gift to you!


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@Asarsax
Do you have any suggestions?
What else can you tell me about the target of your affection?