Fuck This Feeling- DUDZ

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Hook (melodic)
She ripped out my heart, from my chest
Made me a hot fucking mess
All she has to do was confess
But she slept with my fucking  homie
And now I'm feeling so lonely
Decaying so slowly 
And I'm about to regress

Verse 1 (all verses melodic)
I did a lot of my time
Thinking about you all the time
But I did not crime
So why you gotta make me cry
I took 5 bottles to dry my eyes 
Beers and tears they flood my eyes
Sobriety, that's fucking lame
Only here you fucking game

Hook (melodic)
She ripped out my heart, from my chest
Made me a hot fucking mess
All she has to do was confess
But she slept with my fucking  homie
And now I'm feeling so lonely
Decaying so slowly 
And I'm about to regress

Verse 2
Pain is inevitable, life is shit
Might as well say fuck it and whip 50
In a 25, about to die
Wish that wasn't a lie
Feeling crowd me like a dark cloud
Blowing clouds to strip to me down into bones
I'm on a fire, circus flare like a pipe
Gotta pick new feelings like ripe berries
Self loathing, self pitied, and self decrypting

Hook (melodic)
She ripped out my heart, from my chest
Made me a hot fucking mess
All she has to do was confess
But she slept with my fucking  homie
And now I'm feeling so lonely
Decaying so slowly 
And I'm about to regress

Verse 3
What did I do, what I do to deserve the pain
What do I do, what do I do, to numb the pain
I'm like a stale drywall, yeah I'm plain
But my life is just some game you play in
Civil War with emotions like I'm Thor
All for one and one for all, feeling die and my life is dry
Spread my wings and let my fly

Hook (melodic)
She ripped out my heart, from my chest
Made me a hot fucking mess
All she has to do was confess
But she slept with my fucking  homie
And now I'm feeling so lonely
Decaying so slowly 
And I'm about to regress


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Sounds like a mix of Juice WRLD and X
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Juice WRLD mostly but a bit of X
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this sounds more like juice wrld, a lot like robbery (flows like it) and also juice wrld uses three line flows. Spaces signal lots of time between the words.

Hook
She ripped my heart out   from inside me, made   me     a      hot    fucking      mess
Now she's trying to frame me, it hurts less
But when she slept on my chest
It felt like heaven   but   on earth, but now it's a 'lot worse
Decaying slowly 
So fucking lonely,
Boom, take the gun out, and then shoot me.

Verse
I tried to take her in but,
It felt like she was,
a fucking alc-oho-lic  

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the flow for chorus is this

She ripped out my       heart, from-my           chest
Made      me a hot             fucking       mess
All she has to do             was confess
But she slept with my fuck-ing  ho-mie
And now I'm feeling        so lonely
De      caying so slow-ly 
And I'm about to re-gress

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Juice has a lot of drug references, which were an inspiration as well
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You do realise this means it isn't your friend that she slept with, by default? It's your enemy, who you mistook for a friend.

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I know that...but that is not the primary focus
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For a melodic type song, you have to focus on feelings and how they hit hard. For the guy, you make a hard hitting disstrack with good rhyme flow and hard hitting disses
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So is it a true story?
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Nope, just a writing piece
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Oh. That does sound a lot like juice