Fuck This Feeling- DUDZ

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  • SupaDudz
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    Hook (melodic)
    She ripped out my heart, from my chest
    Made me a hot fucking mess
    All she has to do was confess
    But she slept with my fucking  homie
    And now I'm feeling so lonely
    Decaying so slowly 
    And I'm about to regress

    Verse 1 (all verses melodic)
    I did a lot of my time
    Thinking about you all the time
    But I did not crime
    So why you gotta make me cry
    I took 5 bottles to dry my eyes 
    Beers and tears they flood my eyes
    Sobriety, that's fucking lame
    Only here you fucking game

    Hook (melodic)
    She ripped out my heart, from my chest
    Made me a hot fucking mess
    All she has to do was confess
    But she slept with my fucking  homie
    And now I'm feeling so lonely
    Decaying so slowly 
    And I'm about to regress

    Verse 2
    Pain is inevitable, life is shit
    Might as well say fuck it and whip 50
    In a 25, about to die
    Wish that wasn't a lie
    Feeling crowd me like a dark cloud
    Blowing clouds to strip to me down into bones
    I'm on a fire, circus flare like a pipe
    Gotta pick new feelings like ripe berries
    Self loathing, self pitied, and self decrypting

    Hook (melodic)
    She ripped out my heart, from my chest
    Made me a hot fucking mess
    All she has to do was confess
    But she slept with my fucking  homie
    And now I'm feeling so lonely
    Decaying so slowly 
    And I'm about to regress

    Verse 3
    What did I do, what I do to deserve the pain
    What do I do, what do I do, to numb the pain
    I'm like a stale drywall, yeah I'm plain
    But my life is just some game you play in
    Civil War with emotions like I'm Thor
    All for one and one for all, feeling die and my life is dry
    Spread my wings and let my fly

    Hook (melodic)
    She ripped out my heart, from my chest
    Made me a hot fucking mess
    All she has to do was confess
    But she slept with my fucking  homie
    And now I'm feeling so lonely
    Decaying so slowly 
    And I'm about to regress


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    --> @SupaDudz
    Sounds like a mix of Juice WRLD and X
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    Juice WRLD mostly but a bit of X
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    --> @SupaDudz
    this sounds more like juice wrld, a lot like robbery (flows like it) and also juice wrld uses three line flows. Spaces signal lots of time between the words.

    Hook
    She ripped my heart out   from inside me, made   me     a      hot    fucking      mess
    Now she's trying to frame me, it hurts less
    But when she slept on my chest
    It felt like heaven   but   on earth, but now it's a 'lot worse
    Decaying slowly 
    So fucking lonely,
    Boom, take the gun out, and then shoot me.

    Verse
    I tried to take her in but,
    It felt like she was,
    a fucking alc-oho-lic  

  • SupaDudz
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    the flow for chorus is this

    She ripped out my       heart, from-my           chest
    Made      me a hot             fucking       mess
    All she has to do             was confess
    But she slept with my fuck-ing  ho-mie
    And now I'm feeling        so lonely
    De      caying so slow-ly 
    And I'm about to re-gress

  • SupaDudz
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    Juice has a lot of drug references, which were an inspiration as well
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    You do realise this means it isn't your friend that she slept with, by default? It's your enemy, who you mistook for a friend.

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    I know that...but that is not the primary focus
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    For a melodic type song, you have to focus on feelings and how they hit hard. For the guy, you make a hard hitting disstrack with good rhyme flow and hard hitting disses
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    So is it a true story?
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    Nope, just a writing piece
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    Oh. That does sound a lot like juice