This is the common usage for the archangels
- Michael - the Sun
- Raphael - Mercury
- Anael - Venus
- Melchizedek - Earth
- Gabriel - the Earth's Moon
- Samael - Mars
- Sachiel - Jupiter
- Cassiel - Saturn
Wrong-Michael is Mars as Mars is red-all paintings of Michael is red and it means blood, an military in almost all cultures
Gabriel is Mercury as the Messenger in the Bible-Mercury acts as a messenger in space and all ancient culture and modern cultures have mercury as the messenger
Raphael is the healer and the peaceful tender so she is the moon-healing through the night and bringing peace. There is a misconception that the moon is feminine just because of fertility and menstrual cycles, but if that was true then Allah would be a women-which he is not.
The moon plays a significant role in Islam because of the use of a lunar Islamic calendar to determine the date of Ramadan. The crescent moon, known as Hilal, defines the start and end of Islamic months as it did for the Babylonian calendar. The need to determine the precise time of the appearance of the hilal was one of the inducements for Muslim scholars to study astronomy. The Quran emphasises that the moon is a sign of God, not itself a god.
femininity in space comes from the virgo constellation mostly and maybe mercury.
Samael is the sun-he is dominate,the authority of God, masculine and he destroys sinners, the reason why he isn't mars is because he has no connection to military while Michael does.
The rest is fine but these two changes are neccessary