Sad Rap Song: by SupaDudz

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  • SupaDudz
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    Notice: No I am not sad. It is a sample rap that I made off a sample beat

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    I'm always so preoccupied in all my thoughts
    And I've thinking so hard that I'm always starstruck
    But I've been slipping down the wrong path lately
    But I've been trying to get back on the right track baby
    My mind is more cluttered than a 9 year old room
    And that chick that used to sit right behind me in class
    She was moved away like a negative force
    I tried to do anything so I can get her attention
    Tried some new jeans and cop a new pair
    While the teacher be talking I always be daydreaming
    So my perfect little grades that my parents boast
    Starting to get rough around the common core
    And everyday I go home and I cry to myself
    Because I think I'm going to be a disappointment all of my life
    A mistake that was never supposed to happen
    So I drown out all my problems in this mobile device
    Cause that's only safe haven that I got in this life
    Man my anxiety is getting harder these days
    But I never get tested cause my parents say it's a fake disorder
    So all my thoughts thrown away like a disposal
    And all this beef going around in my group
    Is more cooked the a filet mignonette
    Whatever that French word is
    Cause the truth is that is what my parents wanted me to take
    But I didn't want to because I liked Spanish
    All the mistakes keep adding up
    Until my whole mind is blown up
    And this is so insane
    Life is basically a chess game
    And I never beat the core of the king 
    So why go for the king
    It is a cruel game with no regrets

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    --> @SupaDudz
    You seriously need to work on your flow and rhyme scheme, I literally rate this 0/10
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    --> @SupaDudz
    Do you genuinely like mumble rap?
  • SupaDudz
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    --> @RationalMadman
    I genuinely don't think you know what the hell you are talking about. You obviously didn't rap it the right way because it is a mellow rap, not some hardcore Eminem hardcore emo shit you rap. It is supposed to give this sort of mumble ish vibe

    Also no real rhyme scene. This is an off cuff verse