I went from the lowest point I ever hit in my life to potentially getting a book deal signed

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  • SupaDudz
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    Dear Friends of DART,

    Recently, life has been hard for me in a sort of sense. I hit the bottom of life for some reason. I felt I had nothing. I felt worthless and felt I had no value. I felt no one would ever care about me. I talked to someone and they said that you should write poems and see how you feel. Well I started doing that and presenting them to people on Discord who said I should get them published. I read them to the school and I got raved views. Now, I am awaiting a response from a publishing company for my poems in a book. I don't think it will happen(considering my age and the odds of it happening are slim to none), I still feel very rewarded that someone took the time to read my poems

    I feel hope in this world and this is just motivation to you that anything is possible. I am 15 years and went from a dark place in my life to now having hope! You can do anything!


    I hope this is some sort of motivation for you to start your Saturday 
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    These are really good! 
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    --> @David
    Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed them

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    bump

    -motivational post goes unrecognized smh
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    --> @SupaDudz
    Life can be terrible sometimes. More like 70% of the time if I'm being honest. Good to know you managed to overcome it in a positive and uplifting way. You got some talent there that's for sure.
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    Thank you! I have a routine I follow everyday and that helps a lot

    Poetry is my thoughts and other peoples thoughts poured into this complimation

    I am glad you liked it
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    --> @SupaDudz
    If you don't mind me asking . . .

    While everyone steps over us
    Or ignores our troubles
    A faint smile in distance
    Whiter than a fresh pack of golf balls
    Straighter than a 180 degree angle
    A smile so bright
    The sun would be jealous
    The only person that notices me in the mud
    Helping me up from life's harsh ways
    To give us a hug
    And say it’s ok
    Laugh with us
    Sing with us
    Dance with us
    Make the world's problems go away
    An angel sent from heaven
    Eyes blue, like ocean waves dancing
    Long and brown, like one of the craziest water slides

    Who IRL are you referring to here?
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    Yay actual lines!

    I am referring to my crush in those sentences

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    Is she also the person in "Go away love"
  • SupaDudz
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    She is as well

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    Does she have any inkling about how you feel? Has she read any of the poems?
  • SupaDudz
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    I keep my poems to myself mostly besides online people. I have shared my class assigned poems with the class so she knows I am very good with poetry
  • Logical-Master
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    If I challenged you to a debate on whether you should ask out your crush ASAP, would you accept?
  • SupaDudz
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    I have some time that I may think about doing this


    What are some conditions?

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    1. Topic: The user known as SupaDudz should ask out his crush as soon as reasonably possible!
    2. Three Rounds
    3. 4000 Characters per round
    4. Open Voting 
    5. BOP is equal
    6. Point System: Winner Selection
    7. Voting Period: One month
    8. I'm PRO.
    9. No semantics.
      1. Ask out can mean anything from asking her on a date, asking her to be your girlfriend. 
      2. As soon as reasonably possible means the next time you have a reasonable opportunity to talk to her without any unrelated pressing concerns that would get in the way (i.e. you're going on vacation, she's in the hospital, etc)
    That's about all I can think of!
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    Let's do it

  • SupaDudz
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    Created. Accept under the condos stated
  • SupaDudz
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    Should I accept yours or should you accept mine
  • SupaDudz
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    Accepted yours
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    Whoops. Didn't see yours until now. Go ahead and accept since I think PRO should go first. I'll accept your rendering of the terms as provided in your debate setup though!
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    Ok great! I accepted yours anyway. LOL Moment there
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    "You've hit the bottom of life" ... that's actually laughable. You have no clue what that truly means. 
  • SupaDudz
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    True. But it is the lowest I have been in my life
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    It's a typical teenager up and down. Trust me it always gets better. I've seen hell, so to someone like me it's kinda offensive you even think you have it bad. So, cheer up and look at your negatives in life as a blessing, bc trust me they can truly be darker. 
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    --> @SupaDudz
    While everyone steps over us
    Or ignores our troubles
    A faint smile in distance
    Whiter than a fresh pack of golf balls
    Straighter than a 180 degree angle
    A smile so bright
    The sun would be jealous
    The only person that notices me in the mud
    Helping me up from life's harsh ways
    To give us a hug
    And say it’s ok
    Laugh with us
    Sing with us
    Dance with us
    Make the world's problems go away
    An angel sent from heaven
    Eyes blue, like ocean waves dancing
    Long and brown, like one of the craziest water slides

    Does Thett3 know that you're publishing poems about them?