Rap Battle vs bsh1
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After 3 votes and with the same amount of points on both sides...
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Vote on who you think had the better flow, analogies, disses, etc.
NOTE: Conduct should be taken into acct for rap is a genre with insuts. Anything goes
Supa posed the overall better performance. With better disses, flow, and rhymes. Supa is a clear winner. I will give Bsh1 some credit here too; he hyped himself way better and had better metaphors.
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Aside from the objective discomfort of reading this from BSh being like listening to your not-cool uncle singing gangster rap, I will offer this vote
I will score each round based on the “oh no you dint” vote style, were i award one point for each line that jumps of the page because of its fiery burniness
R1 jump outs
“You just an altar boy no priest would fuck
A rap busboy, you're rhymes went amok”
“So get in my dungeon, put your mouth on that truncheon
Follow instruction and eat that eruption”
R2 jump outs:
With a side of drama”
“So you think your Kylo Ren, a crybaby with no talent,
I'm more the Han Solo type, roguish, hot, and gallant”
“You're a walking carpet, a piece of nerf-herding slime
I'm more of Jon Snow's ilk, fighting in my prime”
“Cause they know I give those torches special head
Your virgin ass? You need sex special ed!”
no stand out lines. IMO
So: for my general decision:
I started thinking supas flow was better initially, then as I read, bsh won me over. Bsh started using much more complex rhyming patterns; though I am disappointed at the lack of iambic pentameter from both sides.
The big thing for me is a particular quality of relevance in insults.
Supa built up a pattern of raps that felt like it was a super burn, but regularly fizzled: take for example this -
“Damn right mother I pull off some alliteration
About to put you in some hyperventilation
More blown up that a hypertonic cell
Man you more stupid than some bitch who fell down a well”
The first three were great, and it’s that last point that I feel has to be more relevant to bsh to land a knock out. It’s the rap equivalent of blue balls - and it seemed there was far more from supa than from bsh.
For that reason, while bshs insults didn’t always land, they felt more in tune, and more relevant.
Saying that, I will say rhyming and style was awesome on both sides, it was very creative and enjoyable.
Note: particular kudos to the awkwardness of bshs opening paragraph spelling out at great, great length why it’s okay to insult each other during a rap battle that hasn’t got a vote-for-conduct option.
Additional note: “Bitch you've been beat, bitch you dead meat” In some ways I feel con should lose a spelling and grammar point for using apostrophes and contractions properly in a rap battle.
Also, bringing up Greek gods in gangster rap kinda deserves either a mark up or mark down - I’m not sure which.
This debate was a lot of fun to read.
Methodology: Because these debates are subjective and impossible to objectively measure, I decide to score each round a point by who wins the round. The person who gets the most points wins the debate.
Round 1: Bsh is the winner of this round. I felt bsh's rap flowed a bit better. I also particularly liked this line: "You just an altar boy no priest would fuck." Ouch!
Round 2: I think pro won this round. Favorite line:
How many times has Virt had to defend your feeder?(Mouth)
With a side of drama
Round 3: Bsh wins this round. Favorite lines:
You neutered and spayed--more spayed like a bitch
You talk about Grindr, like a virgin can talk, your manhood a glitch
Round 4: I think pro wins this round. His Grindr comeback was pretty good:
I'm an Orthodox Christian, I go abstinence
I pray to lord and I look for leadership form the covenance
Everything you gonna say is old news
So what's the score?
2-2 the debate is a tie!
Good job guys
Both of you need to learn flow and rhyme scheme above all else. PM me for some god tier raps if you want to learn.
You're free to vote as you wish.
There is a lot more to say but I'm not going to vote unless there is acceptance to stop a bullshit feud based on it
I am willing to vote here with detailed critical feedback that I promise no other user can or will do but only if both publicly promise not to salt-vote against me here: https://www.debateart.com/debates/457
Please, I do not need unnecessary beef and will let this be as bsh1 doesn't drag me down in an intentional way on troll debates which I do far more than him so I am not going to be accused of abusive voting.
For the record, I believe supadudz has won this after R1 and I will explain why because there are things bsh1 is doing to his flow and rhyme scheme by repeating the same words and just plain not rhyming at all that become fairly unforgivable to an experienced analyst of rap. He is making very good puns and annihilates supadudz in that but there is a lot more to rap than puns and I think you need to stop listening to Nicki Minaj, the pun-specialist of the rap game and listen to more flow experts etc. Your current style is not as good as you may think but also Supa you make frequent errors in flow despite being truer to rap's unwritten rules than bsh1.
Thanks for the vote.
Thanks for the vote, man. Honestly glad not all my lines sucked.
Love your RFD, omfg :)
PS - Greek Gods are BAMF. They always get a mark up.
Yup. Haven't forfeited yet on DART :)
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"How many times has Virt had to defend your feeder"
Ahhh I see now
Thank you! Your first rap was better fmpov
Supa, I know, lol. That's what I was critiquing. That you needed to offer explanations.
I think your second rap was your best so far.
Fyi I put parenthesis on the side to explain my point, not bc it was my bars
Posted my good sir
Beautiful flow. You understand flow at least hopefully the song i PMd you introduced you to real rap of this kind.
That was actually ridiculously good flow despite the amount of repeating words making it cheated. I'm impressed.
Tag me when this is over and I will vote.
this should be fun