Rap Battle vs bsh1

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Rap Battle vs bsh1

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The debate is finished. The distribution of the voting points and the winner are presented below.

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Winner

After 3 votes and with the same amount of points on both sides...

It's a tie!

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Publication date: 12.11.2018 03:52AM
Last updated date: 12.30.2018 06:49PM
Type: Standard
Number of rounds: 4
Time for argument: Three days
Max argument characters: 30,000
Voting period: Two weeks
Point system: Winner selection
Voting system: Open

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Vote on who you think had the better flow, analogies, disses, etc.

NOTE: Conduct should be taken into acct for rap is a genre with insuts. Anything goes

Round 1

12.11.2018 03:59AM

Pro

NOTE: Good luck to bsh in his first real rap battle. Again the way the raps go do not show real feelings, they all are in fun and games

*hahaha motherfuckers, Dudz is here*

Welcome to the rap game bsh. please to meet you

My name is SupaDudz and it's time to cook you up like beef stew

It's a hard industry and now I'll make it more hard

Just like your cock when I drop the ace of spades card

And I'm gonna make waves just like your moderation

Try to ease up a bit, call it toleration

Because as a straight male I've had gay guys in their feelings

While you can't even control the anti-bsh uprising

And the body pics on DDO are fantasies

Because the odds of that happening are a spec in the galaxy

Call me Darth Vader, I am the king of the evil and darkness and infecting your brain like a nasty ass parasite

But then call me the Skywalker, I taught that bitch Ray to have some loyalty and give Kylo a good fight

Run away bitch this is a betrayal

Anakin so jealous, he just hit me up in the email

DS9 your favorite, but I compare to VOJ

Because your the worst of the best and milking shit for spare change

No Rational here but I am the most creative here

Piccaso and Rowling with a mix of young ideas for me to steer

Yea I made a student in your eyes

But I am the teacher that needs to play a game of iSpy

To keep your from soaring away and kept in a container like iFly

Moderator try to be cool

Moderator try to be tough

Moderator try to be in

But moderator will get himself into a pin

Moderator thinks it to rough

Moderator sends down the hammer to act cool when he acting just a like fool

And no abuse here on the page

I got the money to pay off the wage

Meek Mill, yea I'm the Difference

While you been sitting in the car smoking off in the distance

Your gonna get all Pixar in this bitch

Cry, cry, and sob and come out with something more irritating than a snitch

Cmon Pixar that is pathetic

Cars 3 and Coco? What an utter mess of a rhetoric

Just like Pixar you persuade people into your logic

But your disappear after this diss like the mat haters magic

*poof poof*

12.12.2018 03:30AM

Con

Thank you to Supa for this debate! I am looking forward to a fun, perhaps cathartic experience. Anyone who knows me will tell you I almost never swear, so it should be fun to let my metaphorical head down.

Before I begin, I just want to point out that invective, sexual language, and boasting, among other things, are common to the rap genre. To the extent I use these kinds of language, I am doing so for the purposes of being authentic to the genre itself. I have the utmost respect for Supa as a person, and for almost every user on this site. Any and all such normally inappropriate language is being used with Supa's permission, for artistic expression, and is not meant as a genuine insult. Much like a comedy roast, all is meant in good fun. If anyone would not like to be included as a subject in any of my raps, they may contact me and I will, of course, honor their requests to the greatest possible extent.

I also want to mention this is my first time doing a rap battle, and I am by no means a rap aficionado, so I imagine that this debate will present quite a challenge for me. I will nevertheless do my best to give Supa a run for his money, and may the best rapper win. With all that said...here we go...

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"You wish you were Me"

Bitch you've been beat, bitch you dead meat

I like my men fresh, so I eat that hot flesh

I have that tight ass, but you just offbeat

You're rap has shit flow, ain't got no heat, no

You say "beef stew," that you're best, yo? (lol)

You just mincemeat, so fucking bow low

Like Jon Snow to the Queen, fucking hoe

You just fucking annoying, bitch you're rap is just cloying

And boy I'm not toying, I'm here and destroying

You just wish you were me, I'm a playboy and beast

A mod and a leader, I've got the skids greased

You just an altar boy no priest would fuck

A rap busboy, you're rhymes went amok

Bitch you've been beat, so bitch face defeat

You love Kim Possible, like a third-grade effete

Bitch I'm gonna win, that line is uncrossable

8,000 ELO, so boy kiss my feet

Bitch you talk Star Wars, but you know that I know more

You Jabba's dancer, but you know that I'm no whore

Now work the dance floor, or be fed to the rancor

So get in my dungeon, put your mouth on that truncheon

Follow instruction and eat that eruption

You just wish you were me, got that banhammer large

Bring it down on your ass and make your dick hard

You think you Meek Mill, but you Becky Black

Don't got my prowess, no stick in your stack

Bitch you've been beat, cause bitch I'm elite

Cause my body on fleek and my ass is a treat

Got you on chains, like Leia, my slave

Bitch not a man, so no need to shave

You say you got money, but bitch ain't got money

I dress in Versace, boy you look funny

Goodwill fugly, trash and he scummy

When I make it rain, man those girls they stop scrolling

And when I turn them down, men they extolling

Cause I have the money, bitch I'm bankrolling

Yeah, you just wish you were me, rich and hot, 3rd degree

So sit down and shut up while I spill the T

A straight ten, a kingpin, yeah fucker that's me

So sit down and shut up, admit you're debris

Bitch.

*drops mic*

Round 2

12.12.2018 10:51PM

Pro

*hehehee here we go*

Choppiest flow that I ever had to read

I'll have give you credit but I ain't gonna concede

Analogies that you relate ain't worthy of participation

While everyone is waiting for Supa to come in with obliteration

Damn right I'm Ron Stoppable and lemme give it with a run down

And then you'll look sillier than Bozo the Clown

Ron is the baller that you wish to be, setting up them records like Drew Brees

Ron is the player that you wish to be, calling up KP and fucking on the daily

Ron is the world saver that you wish to be, that bitch went monkey and destroyed the robots totally

And this shit is betrayal at it's finest

I guess I'm Kylo Ren, as a righteous

Damn right you a mod but you ain't a leader

How many times has Virt had to defend your feeder?(Mouth)

And what's your obsession with sex dungeons?

When the only one you been near is Dungeons and Dragons competition

And you would probably go and taste the rainbow

Being an utter bore like tic tac toe

Flaming gay, but your rhymes were cold

And a body more nastier than shower mold

You as so dull as a flower pot

You ain't that elegant cooking your tea outta the kettle cot

Your strongest feat is ELO

But Rational still got you in the hole

20-0 for a while, call him the Undertaker

I need you get you some air because your losing your pride, get a ventilator

Better at contributing to the community

Better at spiting bars causing some vulnerability

Everyone got a soft side

But your cake just got soaked by a tide(water makes things soft to a certain extend)

Money the only that you got

But I think you got Dimensia and simply just forgot

I'm 15 and only just a teen

My whole 3 years high school is the worlds wet dream

Katherine bitch yea I stand up

Your rhymes are more stale than 7-up

I'm referring to you as KSI

Basic rhyme schemes with a basic allibi

A gay male looking to spit bars on the side

You haven't dared stepped into the cream of the crop

I guess its Daylight Savings because time you just took a drop

Bsh be honest I'll dig you into a smut

I'll fuckin bury so hard like the motherfucking shot put

I already set school records on the field

OSU just hit me up with another deal

Bitch lasagna

With a side of drama

Using the same word, repetition

And by now you can already envision

The title belt being raised over my head

While you sit down and cry over the thread

About how moderating gets you oh so stressed

It's not that it's the fact that the whole gang feelin' oppressed

Wylted and Rational

Your not even a fractional

Of the Chicago PD

So stop acting like your the head of authority

Mike can put you in the deep space like gravity

Your taste in flow is like the taste of salt

All bitter, and all your fault

Like, damn, how could you like the shit that Kid Buu spews

Because that is your raps allude too

A rip off of every A-list rapper

Rip into your soul like a full grown snapper

And everyone one of your guys will come for me

And I'll say I am a straight as this line can be

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And they say, please lemme give you 200

And then pretty soon I wondered...

Why do these guys wanna hop on the engine of the Porsche?

Well that's because your kissing got their throats hoarse

*bang bang*

Yea your embarrassed

Even Rational has witnessed

*pathetic*

12.13.2018 12:34AM

Con

Do a Jon Snow and bend the knee now

Cause I'm the Queen of Dragons, what's your name now?

Yeah you a little shit, egotist, think your good at this

Think again, cause I'm the ten,

Motherfucking King of flow, Lord of beats, Queen of Rap

So shut your trap and know this:

I don't need no game, already got my throne, notice?

Bend the knee, beg to me, and maybe you'll get noticed

You a sidepiece, no main event, pitiful rhymes ain't no diss.

Sad Little Finger, little dick, your flow piss.

I get the men, suit and tie, 50 Shades of dapper

"Lasagna," "beef stew," you more a chef than rapper

I do that kinky shit, Khal Drogo breeds me right

Your ugly ass can't get laid, but if you plead they might

Hoes don't even want your money looking at your face

But my milk tastes like golden honey, they know that I'm the ace

And I don't need to explain my rhymes like someone failed at writing

Your parenthetical sidebars are more pathetic than enlightening

Yeah, so I'm the flaming gay, standing unburnt like Daenarys

Your flow so lazy bad, fucking laughable it's just careless

You just a virgin on the sidelines, I'm on the catwalk, Calvin Kleins

All the men they want to sleep with me and drink me up like wine

In your wet dreams and your sex dreams, you know that I'm the star

Turning straight to gay, and gay to wild, I'm the sexiest by far

And RM's pretty ELO ain't gonna last too long, already beat him

In an easy bout, an easy rout, I've bedimmed his shinning star

So you think your Kylo Ren, a crybaby with no talent,

I'm more the Han Solo type, roguish, hot, and gallant

You're a walking carpet, a piece of nerf-herding slime

I'm more of Jon Snow's ilk, fighting in my prime

Talk about shower mold and common colds, you're a walking disaster

You look like Shrek, only if he never lived happily ever after

So motherfucker back off, before I pound you into dust

Cause I'm the baddest bitch here, I make them all feel lust

Do a Jon Snow and bend the knee now

Cause I'm the Queen of Dragons, what's your name now?

Yeah you a little shit, egotist, think your good at this

Think again, cause I'm the ten,

Motherfucking King of flow, Lord of beats, Queen of Rap

So shut your trap and know this:

I don't need no game, already got my throne, notice?

Bend the knee, beg to me, and maybe you'll get noticed

I'm the main event, no sidepiece, rhymes on-point like oh bliss.

Like Arya, I say good by, Little Finger dismissed.

Bitch. You lost.

*drops mic*

Round 3

12.13.2018 02:08AM

Pro

*Now and Now, Now and Now. 2 times man. That's pathetic*

Guess were calling occupations out for disses

I'm Chef Boneyard cooking up the spices

Your beat went from shit to utter diarrhea

Your modding career is more of a joke than social media

Next time I need a Laxative I read your rap

Because I think it's about to make me take a crap

Sorry for the ass joke

But you ain't an elegant folk

That you proudly stated over the forum

Your more pathetic than half of Trump's quorum

Bend the bsh over before the ban begins(B)

Stood a sad chance, sadly he stomped on shit, like Ndamunkin Suh(BS)

Hardly ever had any head but has hashed out he's had hundreds of hookups (BSH)

Sucks off some stoner for some quick stacks (BSH S)

Utter embarrassed of urethas and utters(BSH Su)

Call me his Cryptonite cause I changed his course(BSH Suc)

Kanye mentality with a kink of thinking he's King Kratos(BSH Suck)

Sucks that someone has something wrong his syllogism is stupid(BSH Sucks)

Damn right mother I pull off some alliteration

About to put you in some hyperventilation

More blown up that a hypertonic cell

Man you more stupid than some bitch who fell down a well

Farewell, your pizzazz is long gone

I got more bars than colors in crayola crayon

You'd be the person to make James Charles go straight

You just fell into the Supa bait

Thanks you for being Han Solo

I killed your ass for the power though

The only sex dreams I think about are dreams with Korinna

You'll run out of designer to buy, Bye Fe-li-cia

And you'll be left with a pit of darkness

Knowing that you wasted your money on brand names than fabrics

But since we talking about the clothes

I mask out all of my foes

NMDs on my feet

I be wearing Supreme, up in this street

You are not some of idol

You are about turn idle

Why the fuck do you use choruses?

Did you run out of bars to cause bruises?

1/10 on Grindr

Where is your talent, I can not find-her?

I'm not gonna RiceGum, but I keep it real

I got you so weak that you can't even feel

The power and wrath of your rap enemy

Calling you Nemo, an-ne-ne-ne-ne-no-my

I'm cut your deferans like a vasectomy

St. George bitch, I'm the dragon slayer

Conduct these bars like Dexter's lair

Anatomy so complex you need some educating

You ain't educating but your masturbating

To some gay guy that you never get

So stop hyping yourself up that you make the boys wet

I haven't seen a boyfriend on your status

I am the Brahmin of the Indian classes

Your the untouchable

Your so unshockable

Hidden chlamydia

Somewhere down your lineage, you may have lost your dignity of your familia

12.16.2018 12:54AM

Con

"Whipped"

So you talk about my chorus and shit

Like they don't the bring the money, remits

I'm a Nicki Minaj, a bloody Cardi B

I get those devotees like Horus and Sif

You lookin' at the King of Flow, Queen of Beats

Ain't changing my style cause some Virgin say so

Oh! You ain't go not bitches cause they're all in my name

You've lost this game already, I've got the men and the fame

So you better bend over, I've got the whip, come get tamed

I've got the skill and the knowledge, I don't need no acrostics

you give some first grader's shit, I can do those heroics

Panegryic and Sestina, Alexandrine with meter

Beautiful like patina, my rhymes torch like Demeter

Your torch fucked up like peyronie's, syphilitic and sordid

Open sores, your bars horrid, flow torpid

Haters don't get to me, y'all know I'm just stoic

You talk about wet dreams cause that's all you can get

When the men lie with me they leave in a sweat

Cause they know I give those torches special head

Your virgin ass? You need sex special ed!

You talk to me about modding, I'll bring that banhammer down on your ass,

Call it a flogging, you know your dick hard at the thought of that mast

You wanna come at me, then the joke is on you

I'll get your legs spread and banhammer you dead

So you talk about my chorus and shit

Like they don't the bring the money, remits

I'm a Nicki Minaj, a bloody Cardi B

I get those devotees like Horus and Sif

You lookin' at the King of Flow, Queen of Beats

Ain't changing my style cause some Virgin say so

Oh! You ain't go not bitches cause they're all in my name

You've lost this game already, I've got the men and the fame

So you better bend over, I've got the whip, come get tamed

You neutered and spayed--more spayed like a bitch

You talk about Grindr, like a virgin can talk, your manhood a glitch

My ass bewitches like a ten outta ten, the poor men all want me

The rich men all fuck me, I live well, filigree

You think you're Saint George, lol dragons, I ride 'em

Swimming in golden seas, Smaug bequeathed 'em

Cause they fall in love with me, bel esprit

Yeah I'm here to win it, and came up in here and did it

And boy I'm here to show 'em, how Supa I owned him

This rap is my hymn, it's working here like the gym

Swaying with that supermodel swish,

Cause I'm the real, real bad bish

Ain't no low trash like you, I slash you askew

You just unfit, but I came here to commit

So you talk about my chorus and shit

Like they don't the bring the money, remits

I'm a Nicki Minaj, a bloody Cardi B

I get those devotees like Horus and Sif

You lookin' at the King of Flow, Queen of Beats

Ain't changing my style cause some Virgin say so

Oh! You ain't go not bitches cause they're all in my name

You've lost this game already, I've got the men and the fame

So you better bend over, I've got the whip, come get tamed.

Supa burned up in flames, lifeless in shame.

Bitch, you lost, you've been maimed.

Bend over, bow down.

Round 4

12.16.2018 01:39AM

Pro

*That's what I waited 3 days for...ha...*

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Ok man, I see your a little bit angry

You look a little bit hungry

Eat a Snickers, it's so yummy

Cause you need to come back to reality

You plowing Dragons man that's bestiality

I'll throw you in jail faster than Madman's anger

911 man I think we in danger

Hide your dogs, hide your cats, this man is insane

He has no brain

He's a lunatic broken free in the sea

Cause he ain't biting me, no HIV

Shawty like a melody gotchu in replay

Your Drew Lynch but less funny and speak nonsense, ay!(Pig Latin roots end in ay)

Wanna bring up the Greek gods, I spit til the Moon

Poseidon gonna drown your house in the lagoon

Zeus gonna take out his thunderbolt, and strike with pride

Eliminate your gay talk and saying all the guys ride

The only thing that you'll ever get

Is your anime pillow you won in a bet

Virgin is the only diss that you got

But in the end I almost forgot

I'm an Orthodox Christian, I go abstinence

I pray to lord and I look for leadership form the covenance

Everything you gonna say is old news

"I am 15, I'm horny, I'm lonely," but I got the clues

That you were the same way too

I'll scare you to death like I'm Boo(girl from Monsters inc)

And when you lose the battle

Are you gonna throw down the hammer

Cause I got the power to throw down the mantle

While your only friend is the Indian phone scammer

And bitch don't say I got no social life

Imma chop it up, call me the knife

I go out and socialize

You be on this website spewing lies

Your raps aren't an anthem they're a joke

You sink to the bottom like a regular Coke

I'm like Diet, I'll flow up to the top

And the farmers always pick me cause I'm cream of their crop

You be RiceGumming yourself a whole lot

Your gonna need a tissues because after tears come the snop

Complexity is more than just a skill

It's an art that takes time to master, on the bill

You think you can get into the ring without training?

I'm having to show you a hardcore beating

Cause you didn't hit the gym

And that's the reason you never heard your hymn

I got you like a puppet on the string

Miracle master

Your life falling down like a disaster

*finish strong! just fell short*

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Thanks to opponent for the rap battle. Should start reading now to get some RFDs

12.16.2018 09:32AM

Con

Before I post my final rap, I'd like to thank Supa for this debate. It was a fun experience and certainly tested my creativity. I'd appreciate any voters pointing out any stand out lines; I am sure Supa would appreciate the same. I would also like to take this opportunity to ask for your vote. Thank you!

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"Rap God 2.0"

You think they're Greek gods? Bitch you don't know a thing.

Horus, Egyptian god of Kingship and Lord of the Sky

Merging with Ra like Jekyll meets Hyde

And me? I'm Norse like Sif, mother of Thor

Golden-haired beauty, couldn't ask for more

Supa looks more like a satyr with craters

Adolescent pockmarks the hoes can't ignore

But when they see me they can't save it for later

They need me now, I'm a crave activator

The rip off my close, I make good husbands traitors

Y'all know that I killed it, cause I came here and drilled it

Like you know that I thrilled 'em, came up in here and grilled him

The men I fulfilled 'em, and the truth, man, I spilled it

So hush and bow down, let the Queen wear her crown

Cause y'all know that I'm flaming, my bars here and they blazing

I got that banhammer strong, Hall of Fame: I belong

You haters all wrong, just admit I'm amazing.

Amazing bitch. Just praise bish and back down.

So what I'm a beast? You a chef with no feast.

Snickers and coke, go and get diabetes.

I am here and I'm greased, with men out there drooling

Too many choices, picking dates is so grueling

I'm the Hephaestus of rap, all craftsman no crap

Not like a virgin with sex jokes, ain't got your ass tapped

You ain't got no material, all smoke, no mirrors yo

You say virgin's all I got, but dude that's all on you, though

You think that's all I said, then get to the back of the queue

Ain't dealing with no bitches who are illiterate, too

Man, I've traveled the world, lived that life of adventure

All you've got left for you is to die with no treasure

You in decline, they so no pearls before swine

But you've wasted your youth on these half-assed rhymes

You think you got friends but the truth's just the opposite

You waste your time here, so shut up and just stop this shit

I got this win in the bag, and though I don't mean to brag

When your father he hungry, man he call me his stag

And your mother she horny, so she takes time to watch

Y'all know when you're with me, the sex is topnotch

Y'all know that I killed it, cause I came here and drilled it

Like you know that I thrilled 'em, came up in here and grilled him

The men I fulfilled 'em, and the truth, man, I spilled it

So hush and bow down, let the Queen wear her crown

Cause y'all know that I'm flaming, my bars here and they blazing

I got that banhammer strong, Hall of Fame: I belong

You haters all wrong, just admit I'm amazing.

Amazing bitch. Just praise bish and back down.

Yeah, you right at the end, you did just fall short,

Like what Monica said to Bill, what's that, a wart?

Like what any girl will say to you when you can't drill

When they can't get that ecstasy, you ain't got no skill

Cause your no fantasy, just a sad-ass motherfucker who doubted me

I'm bijou motherfucker, I'm expensive and collectible, marquis

Got my machete and my bars to cut you down right

Cause I'm the emcee god and this shit's my birthright

I got that erudition, I got those subtle jibes, my rap dynamite

You need to bribe the voters, my lines cesium bright

More parenthetical side bars, that's just pathetic and bizarre

Verbal carnage, verbal garbage, your lines don't get you far

Against a King, against a Queen, against a motherfucking Tsar

Bitch, you got no flow, you go no rhythm, just a metric cataclysm

Bitch, I'm lissome and I'm sexy, you got nothing up against me

So bend over like I told ya, and I'll show you I've got rhythm

Lyricsm, and talent more than some fucked up wannabe

I'm Adonis to your Pan, I'm Hades' Persephone

I'm gorgeous and I'm smart, I got that master's degree

I wear that gold and amethyst, so fucking suck my prism

Y'all know that I killed it, cause I came here and drilled it

Like you know that I thrilled 'em, came up in here and grilled him

The men I fulfilled 'em, and the truth, man, I spilled it

So hush and bow down, let the Queen wear her crown

Cause y'all know that I'm flaming, my bars here and they blazing

I got that banhammer strong, Hall of Fame: I belong

You haters all wrong, just admit I'm amazing.

Amazing bitch. Just praise bish and back down.

So put me on that pantheon, Jesus knows I'm on Olympus

Mixing metaphors like a badass, I twist those words like a gymnast

Got as many original bars, unlike Supa no scars

Herculean and legendary, I am no mortal by far

I am a Rap King, a Rap Queen, a Rap God, immortal

Not Xerxes, more 300, shoes like Cardi's: blood red

Reading Supa's entrails: yup, the Dudz' dead.

Now it's time to face facts, no this ain't not act

Y'all know that I killed it, cause I came here and drilled it

So hush and bow down, let the Queen wear her crown

Just praise bish and back down.

Cause I am trailblazing, yes bitch I'm amazing:

Royalty of Rap, I'm God here, now clap

Rap God 2.0

I win.

*drops mic*

12.30.2018 06:49PM

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@bsh1

Both of you need to learn flow and rhyme scheme above all else. PM me for some god tier raps if you want to learn.

12.25.2018 10:35PM

#26

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@RationalMadman

You're free to vote as you wish.

12.25.2018 02:18AM

#25

There is a lot more to say but I'm not going to vote unless there is acceptance to stop a bullshit feud based on it

12.25.2018 02:18AM

#24

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@bsh1

I am willing to vote here with detailed critical feedback that I promise no other user can or will do but only if both publicly promise not to salt-vote against me here: https://www.debateart.com/debates/457

Please, I do not need unnecessary beef and will let this be as bsh1 doesn't drag me down in an intentional way on troll debates which I do far more than him so I am not going to be accused of abusive voting.

For the record, I believe supadudz has won this after R1 and I will explain why because there are things bsh1 is doing to his flow and rhyme scheme by repeating the same words and just plain not rhyming at all that become fairly unforgivable to an experienced analyst of rap. He is making very good puns and annihilates supadudz in that but there is a lot more to rap than puns and I think you need to stop listening to Nicki Minaj, the pun-specialist of the rap game and listen to more flow experts etc. Your current style is not as good as you may think but also Supa you make frequent errors in flow despite being truer to rap's unwritten rules than bsh1.

12.21.2018 08:07PM

#23

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@Mharman

Thanks for the vote.

12.21.2018 05:46AM

#22

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@bsh1

Np!

12.21.2018 05:45AM

#21

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@David

Thanks for the vote, man. Honestly glad not all my lines sucked.

12.21.2018 05:44AM

#20

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@Ramshutu

Love your RFD, omfg :)

PS - Greek Gods are BAMF. They always get a mark up.

12.16.2018 01:39AM

#19

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@bsh1

Awaiting

12.16.2018 12:56AM

#18

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@Vader

Yup. Haven't forfeited yet on DART :)

12.15.2018 11:17PM

#17

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@bsh1

2 hours remaining to post

12.15.2018 08:21PM

#16

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@bsh1

5 hours left

12.15.2018 02:40PM

#15

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@bsh1

You have 11 hours to post

Mharman

12.13.2018 06:42PM

#14

Can't wait for voting period to start.

12.13.2018 03:23AM

#13

"How many times has Virt had to defend your feeder"

LOL!!!!

12.13.2018 02:19AM

#12

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@bsh1

Ahhh I see now

12.13.2018 02:08AM

#11

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@bsh1

Thank you! Your first rap was better fmpov

Posted btw

12.13.2018 01:53AM

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@Vader

Supa, I know, lol. That's what I was critiquing. That you needed to offer explanations.

I think your second rap was your best so far.

12.13.2018 01:02AM

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@bsh1

Fyi I put parenthesis on the side to explain my point, not bc it was my bars

12.13.2018 12:34AM

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@Vader

I posted.

12.12.2018 10:52PM

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@bsh1

Posted my good sir

12.12.2018 03:39AM

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@bsh1

Beautiful flow. You understand flow at least hopefully the song i PMd you introduced you to real rap of this kind.

That was actually ridiculously good flow despite the amount of repeating words making it cheated. I'm impressed.

12.12.2018 03:30AM

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@Vader

Posted.

Mharman

12.11.2018 03:32PM

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@bsh1

@Vader

Tag me when this is over and I will vote.

12.11.2018 02:11PM

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@David

Yep lol

12.11.2018 04:01AM

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@David

Indeed, lol.

12.11.2018 03:55AM

this should be fun

Mharman

12.21.2018 06:22PM

Criterion

Pro

Tie

Con

Points

Winner

1 point(s)

Reason:

Supa posed the overall better performance. With better disses, flow, and rhymes. Supa is a clear winner. I will give Bsh1 some credit here too; he hyped himself way better and had better metaphors.

Ramshutu

12.21.2018 05:22AM

Criterion

Pro

Tie

Con

Points

Winner

1 point(s)

Reason:

#2
Ramshutu
now
Criterion Pro Tie Con Points
Winner ✔ ✗ ✗ 1 point
Reason:
Aside from the objective discomfort of reading this from BSh being like listening to your not-cool uncle singing gangster rap, I will offer this vote
I will score each round based on the “oh no you dint” vote style, were i award one point for each line that jumps of the page because of its fiery burniness
R1 jump outs
“You just an altar boy no priest would fuck
A rap busboy, you're rhymes went amok”
“So get in my dungeon, put your mouth on that truncheon
Follow instruction and eat that eruption”
1-0
R2 jump outs:
“Bitch lasagna
With a side of drama”
“So you think your Kylo Ren, a crybaby with no talent,
I'm more the Han Solo type, roguish, hot, and gallant”
“You're a walking carpet, a piece of nerf-herding slime
I'm more of Jon Snow's ilk, fighting in my prime”
3-1
Round 3:
“Cause they know I give those torches special head
Your virgin ass? You need sex special ed!”
Round 4:
no stand out lines. IMO
So: for my general decision:
I started thinking supas flow was better initially, then as I read, bsh won me over. Bsh started using much more complex rhyming patterns; though I am disappointed at the lack of iambic pentameter from both sides.
The big thing for me is a particular quality of relevance in insults.
Supa built up a pattern of raps that felt like it was a super burn, but regularly fizzled: take for example this -
“Damn right mother I pull off some alliteration
About to put you in some hyperventilation
More blown up that a hypertonic cell
Man you more stupid than some bitch who fell down a well”
The first three were great, and it’s that last point that I feel has to be more relevant to bsh to land a knock out. It’s the rap equivalent of blue balls - and it seemed there was far more from supa than from bsh.
For that reason, while bshs insults didn’t always land, they felt more in tune, and more relevant.
Saying that, I will say rhyming and style was awesome on both sides, it was very creative and enjoyable.
Note: particular kudos to the awkwardness of bshs opening paragraph spelling out at great, great length why it’s okay to insult each other during a rap battle that hasn’t got a vote-for-conduct option.
Additional note: “Bitch you've been beat, bitch you dead meat” In some ways I feel con should lose a spelling and grammar point for using apostrophes and contractions properly in a rap battle.
Also, bringing up Greek gods in gangster rap kinda deserves either a mark up or mark down - I’m not sure which.