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Rap Battle Part 2

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After not so many votes...

It's a tie!
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Type
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Number of rounds
5
Time for argument
Two days
Max argument characters
10,000
Voting period
One week
Point system
Multiple criterions
Voting system
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hey-yo's avatar
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Round 1
Devon's avatar
Devon
Pro
#1
If I ain't the realest one to do it, rap so fluent, somebody tell me who is
I'm coming in the game and I'm saying I'm so intrusive
I'm hitting everything in my way I'm so abusive
I'm a problem and nope there's no solution
A bomb and no way to diffuse it
You better stay away from where I play I'm a nuisance
On any given day I'll spray just to prove it
So you better bow down and look up to me
I'm posted up and brought company to run with me from here on you stuck with me
You need to step aside, you ain't reppin right
You a little rodent and my rhymes are the pesticide
You'll die coming at me that I advise that you never try
Soon as you accepted this battle your future has been jeopardized
It's a fact I'm real to that my crew can testify
hey-yo's avatar
hey-yo
Con
#2
Hey. Yo. 

So much you just don't know. 
break it down in an easy flow
Get it done, blow by blow. 
I whip it like a weepin' willow. 
Chop better than Fargo. 
Don't need any audio. 
Never flop at this show. 

Careful with what I bestow
Power to make the intellect glow
Fill more sails than Glasgow
No reason to forgo 
Call out,' O Romeo, Romeo
wherefore art thou Romeo
Fill the heart and it will grow. 

Assimilate this flow
We deliver more pop than Coco
More thug life than "let it go.
There's creativity in each combo
Pursue this Daddio
I've got the right gusto
We're taking over like N.W.O.

Hey, yo. 

 ....
My goals for this battle:
Short bio to start, Round 1
Remix/reword at least 1 song. 
We will see what time allows. 

For sure, round 3 & 5 will be all me. Unsure if I will add background music.  I don't usually dis, but open to seeing how things go. 

Thanks Devon for putting on a rap battle. Im eager for round 2. Let's get into it. 

Round 2
Devon's avatar
Devon
Pro
#3
My bars are really dope you gone crumble like falafel
Your loud mouth will get hit till you feel awful
Shots to your back that impact is colossal
This 9 will put your eyes by your mouth like Picasso

You think we on the same level? Your head too big
Since you think we on the same level, you can head to B. I. G
You can die behind bars but if I let you live
Then I put the iron to your face like Destro, kid

My shooters stay strapped up, they my guardians
You posted in a gated community? Pay to guard me in
Fuck payin', bully my way in, I'll bring an army in
No bullsh*t when I come charging in

With twin pistols; holding em with a tight grip
The left kinda shaky, lately it got a slight kick
Your men, you, drop down soon as the right click
Lift the soul out him like a sneaker with a tight fit
I'm chef like with a chef knife, slice quick
Poke him before I take it out, nice twist

hey-yo's avatar
hey-yo
Con
#4
Hey.  Yo. 

Turn it up! 
Sike, no musical. 
Till the mind to buildup
we can make it astronomical
Just let, the soul dance. 

Play the music within
Don't give in to the stress
Get it on, fill the grin
Conquer what others transgress
Move like pants are cursed by ants. 

We move to think 
Don't think to move 
Find our kink
This is our own groove
Develop it to be second nature

Develop to be like water
Rise and fall, flow or crash
Train to be greater
Do I speak on dancing? Don't be rash
I speak of a different creature. 

A different kind of jitterbug 
 A romance with violence
Balance to know when to slug
Or, more powerful, non-violence
Shall we do neither or either? 

If you had not already guessed
We can read it inbetween the lines
This is not a theory to test
Come at me and you'll end in a whine
Worst in a whimper, by a cleaver

This is no game 
Or part time shtick
Add fuel to the flame
Everyday it clicks
I can make this known deeper


Round 3
Devon's avatar
Devon
Pro
#5
You act like everything I spit can't be fire
I'll slash your face from cheek to cheek, Michael Myers
When that gun rose, it left everybody who thought it was all dandelion
Once this charge, you gonna catch it like pantyliners

You G? Watch your back or it's off with your head today
Time to clean house get these frauds out, it's time to renovate
Put my kills heads on the wall, that's how I decorate
From here on you'll get smoked into a veggie state

Comparing the two of us is completely unfair
I bet in your city, it don't even get real there
Too many shapeshifters in your circle, you a square
Where you from, the handicapped make noise, they will cheer

I'm in a different lane, while you lames like pedestrians
I'm always down to ride like I'm an equestrian
This battle is the answer for the people who been questionin'
My life real deal, you a movie type thespian




hey-yo's avatar
hey-yo
Con
#6
Music that goes with this post. 

 Alright. Here it is. 1st song.  10 hrs. 7 or so days later. 
Time stamp next to lyrics to match music. Music provided in above link. 

00:00 this will not be easy we can run with it. 
[00:17] hey yo. 

[00:24] Hey Yo. 

[00:25] I hit the ground running, alert, never inert, ready to exert and assert.
My energy is beyond sublime, my progress be organized without crime
I produce more than Fort Worth, Still down to Earth
I know my own worth. Adverse from society. Disperse from cutpurse.
For civilization has been lost to thieves taking minds
We buy hells in drug deals running away to relieve.
But receive only diversion & false repentance
Getting away can be a dream fleeting, ceaselessly bombarding

Can we rest in bane peacefully? (peacefully)
No! I detest the notion not to cry. 
To leave me alone, unless they attest Machavelli
I will not confine myself to the toxicity. sprinkle the holy water!
Don't even come to deliver me (deliver  me)
I am who I can be, no?
We stand alone? That's a falsehood,  don't begin to think. 
Im not going to blink, get caught up in a hoodwink. 
I'm not Mr. Perfect and that is perfect. 
 Tempt me and I may sway. That's OK, it proves I am not empty (Am not empty)
Real humanity is in me even if you offend me
I'll lift me up. Mates (lift me to my feet)... to hold on to. 
I don't care who sees me lean on who. You can lean on me too. 
Grow bonds when emotions have us mute. 
I'll smile in the embrace. There is no disgrace. 
I'm tired of the mix messages
society has me on a tangent, better hold fast to my trident. 

[01:30]  And I am, whoever I say I am
Really think I would not see the scam?
Everyone is better to ignore that spam. 
Industry won't even play my jam
I'm not following the son of Sam
If I did, then how could I say who I am?
Absorbed in imagination, every day I am
All good bro., it's just the way I am

I develope to a niche, a drive and passion, Still I am perceptive. 
Just have to be open to adversity.  How pleasant. 
The rhythm and flow I vibe to is me. 
A hard lesson to learn, in a dojo no less. 
Absent were the shouts of "no mercy." no wannabes. 
Deeper philosophies to help anyone be free. 
Mixed with physical activity it adheres to the soul. 
This message has to be on point. if not, we may ask, who stole
Another mind? made numb somebody  just fucked up.  
We're not talking bad luck, when we become corrupt. 
A finger on a trigger ready to pull, but I refuse to subdue
To overcome getting bullied and shooting up fools
That is the truth we must seek, declare, and tear open. 
Any good moral should be dissected, know what is broken
Then lil Erica can apply her strategy
Avoid her beauty from twisting to tragedy
Where our flow turns in to our own (our own)
Educated by the death of another, I take heed
His failure at simpleness shows us the spirit of Musashi's way
From a handicap man that died and returned. 

And I am, whoever I say I am
Really think I would not see the scam?
Everyone is better to ignore that spam. 
Industry won't even play my jam
I'm not following the son of Sam
If I did, then how could I say who I am?
Absorbed in imagination, every day I am
All good sis., it's just the way I am

Thankful for new empowerment acquired
I dish it out better even if I'm tired.
Go toe to toe, I'll cross that abyss and won't miss.
I can take punishment, find pace and I will break it. 
Go in like a flood to overwhelm enemies
Piece by piece, I pick away at your foundation
Do not assume this demise will be slow, blood will flow. 
Attack with one motto in sight: one hit, sure kill
now do consider, this does include our approach to talk
To know environment and discussion so we always keep advancing
Ask many freaking questions (freaking questions)
Asking the right questions will help with dissecting
The why, the who what when, the where, and the how
'Til I'm grasping another's position I'm formless like water 
'Cause my flow can then crash (flow can crash)... Who can take it?
I'm chasing, I'm pacing, I take and I give
And I'm thankful for intangible assets
Sold to bid for shit, but I'm not for that
Popularity is counterfeit
I will maintain who is me
alert, ready to exert and assert

Cause I am, whoever I say I am
Really think I would not see the scam?
Everyone is better to ignore the spam. 
Industry won't even play my jam
I'm not following the son of Sam
If I did, then how could I say who I am?
Absorbed in imagination, every day I am
Nothing to it, just the way I am


... Thanks for reading/listening. 
Here is same song in shakespearean. I do not know if it matches word for word to the music. 

[00:17] ho yo. 

[00:ho yo. 

[00:25] Ihitteth the did grind running, al'rt, nev'r in'rt, eft to ex'rt and rampallian'rt.
mine own en'rgy is beyond sublime, mine own progresseth beest 'rganiz'd without crime
i produceth m're than f'rt w'rth, still down to earth
i knoweth mine own owneth w'rth.  Adv'rse from society.  Disp'rse from cutpurse. 
f'r civilization hast been hath lost to thieves taking minds
we buyeth hells in drug deals running hence to relieve.
but taketh only div'rsion & false repentance
getting hence can beest a dreameth fleeting, ceaselessly bombarding

can we rest in bane peacefully? (peacefully)
nay! i detest the notion not to caterwauling. 
to leaveth me high-lone, unless those gents attest machavelli
i shall not confine myself to the toxicity.  sprinkle the holy wat'r!
coequal not cometh to deliv'r me (deliv'r  me)
i am who is't i can beest, nay?
we standeth high-lone? yond's a falsehood,  beginneth not to bethink. 
im not going to blinketh, receiveth hath caught up in a hoodwink. 
i'm not mr.  P'rfect and yond is p'rfect. 
  tempteth me and i may sway.  Yond's tis fine, t proves i am not exsufflicate (am not exsufflicate)
real humanity is in me coequal if 't be true thee offendeth me
i'll lift me up.  Mates (lift me to mine own feet).  to holdeth on to. 
i careth not who is't sees me leaneth on who is't.  Thee can leaneth on me too. 
groweth bonds at which hour emotions has't us mute. 
i'll smileth in the embrace.  Th're is nay disgrace. 
i'm not restful of the card messages
society hast me on a tangent, bett'r holdeth festinate to mine own trident. 
 and i am, whoev'r i sayeth i am
very much bethink i wouldst not seeth the scam?
ev'ryone is bett'r to ign're yond spam. 
industry wonneth't coequal playeth mine own jameth
i'm not following the son of sam
if 't be true i didst, then how couldst i sayeth who is't i am?
abs'rb'd in imagination, ev'ry day i am
all valorous bro. , t's just the way i am

i develope to a niche, a driveth and passion, still i am p'rceptive. 
just has't to beest ope to adv'rsity.  How pleasant. 
the rhythm and floweth i vibe to is me. 
a hard lesson to learneth, in a dojo nay less. 
absent w're the shouts of "no m'rcy. " nay wannabes. 
deep'r philosophies to holp anyone beest free. 
did mix with physical activity t adh'res to the soul. 
this message hast to beest on pointeth.  if 't be true not, we may asketh, who is't did steal
anoth'r mind? madeth numb somebody  just fuck'd up. 
we're not talking lacking valor luck, at which hour we becometh c'rrupt. 
a fing'r on a trigg'r eft to pulleth, but i refuseth to subdue
to ov'rcome getting bulli'd and shooting up daws
yond is the sooth we wilt seeketh, declare, and drop of sorrow ope. 
any valorous m'ral shouldst beest dissected, knoweth what is broken
then lil erica can apply h'r strategy
avoideth h'r beauty from twisting to tragedy
wh're our floweth turns in to our owneth (our owneth)
did educate by the death of anoth'r, i taketh he'd
his failure at simpleness shows us the spirit of musashi's way
from a handicap sir yond kicked the bucket and hath returned. 

and i am, whoev'r i sayeth i am
very much bethink i wouldst not seeth the scam?
ev'ryone is bett'r to ign're yond spam. 
industry wonneth't coequal playeth mine own jameth
i'm not following the son of sam
if 't be true i didst, then how couldst i sayeth who is't i am?
abs'rb'd in imagination, ev'ry day i am
all valorous sis. , t's just the way i am

thankful f'r new empow'rment did acquire
i dish t out bett'r coequal if 't be true i'm not restful.
wend toe to toe, i'll crosseth yond abyss and wonneth't misseth.
i can taketh punishment, findeth pace and i shall breaketh t. 
wend in liketh a flote to ov'rwhelm enemies
piece by piece, i picketh hence at thy foundation
doth not assume this demise shall beest sloweth, blood shall floweth. 
attacketh with one motto in sight: one hitteth, sure killeth
anon doth consid'r, this doest includeth our approach to talketh
to knoweth environment and discussion so we at each moment keepeth advancing
asketh many freaking questions (freaking questions)
asking the right questions shall holp with dissecting
the wherefore, the who is't what at which hour, the wh're, and the how
'til i'm grasping anoth'r's position i'm f'rmless liketh wat'r
'cause mine own floweth can then crasheth (flow can crasheth).  Who is't can taketh t?
i'm chasing, i'm pacing, i taketh and i giveth
and i'm thankful f'r intangible assets
did sell to did bid f'r the horror, but i'm not f'r yond
popularity is counteth'rfeit
i shall maintaineth who is't is me
al'rt, eft to ex'rt and rampallian'rt

causeth i am, whoev'r i sayeth i am
very much bethink i wouldst not seeth the scam?
ev'ryone is bett'r to ign're the spam. 
industry wonneth't coequal playeth mine own jameth
i'm not following the son of sam
if 't be true i didst, then how couldst i sayeth who is't i am?
abs'rb'd in imagination, ev'ry day i am
nothing to t, just the way i am



Round 4
Devon's avatar
Devon
Pro
#7
Forfeited
hey-yo's avatar
hey-yo
Con
#8
Extend. 
Round 5
Devon's avatar
Devon
Pro
#9
Since words can't kill, guess what happens after you battle me son
The guns you gone face real long bitch, Natalie Nunn
Everyone gone see your top drop, this gone be a free fall
When I roll up through your circle with rounds like skee-ball

You a dusty ass trick, you ain't ever on fleek
I'll put a noose around your neck, you ain't never gone speak
It'll strangle you until every bone weak
I'll leave you hanging next to somebody on the other line like when the telephone beep

I'm going easy in this battle, this is just me being nice
The thought me of turning up on you, shit ain't even right
You get out of line it's gone be a fight
For them Newports, I pull out the cig but I don't need a light

You should run from it, hollow tips only come from it
Beam on the mac, that's a red eye; its dumb blunted
Fuck it, when I untuck it don't none want it
You'll get gun butted with two hammers I nunchuck it

Remember when I brought up the Newports? Get smoked this round hoe
Cause if I surge in on your general with no warning it's a wrap though
My crew swishers in the back row and he'll let the mac blow
I told him to smoke every guy in your circle, no tobacco
Grab the cig, let the second hand some make the witness go
Steal my weed the glock will kiss you for the trees, that's a mistletoe

hey-yo's avatar
hey-yo
Con
#10
Hi. Thanks again Devon.  

I gotta get this one in now. Im trying to match with music in link here: 

I tried to make it match. Hard but I tried. No way to play it all together. Have to go back and forth. 

[oo:00]

[Hey yo starts 00: ] 
Let's jump in it! 

[00:02] 
Time for us to get a bouncy 
Not going for any rouncy
Oops that word is obsolete
Quick somebody add a trap beat

I'm feeling it

[00:14] 
Filling up that bouncy house- 
Yep! Starting up the barbeque
My woman's donning a nice blouse
She's gonna be a nice view

No time for a nuisance
No need to get crabby
Time for us to groove it
 We'll play a little Shaggy

Play it low
Or play it loud
Go on trumpet
Help us drop it!

Oops, I guess I was late. 
Don't weigh heavy on the mistakes
Im not focused on any rhyme 
Im just trying to keep a good vibe

With that music flowin' 
Never afraid to get my booty movin' 
With my girl around
We be slicing up that dance floor 

I know I been doing it wrong sometimes
Emotions can be overwhelming
The ups and downs don't define us though
Just our willingness to overcome it. 

I wanted a little more 
But limitations aren't a bad thing.
Watching the clock wind down
I'll have to move on long before any forfeit 

My time for day is near
The motions will start again
Getting the food and decorations 
Gonna ham it up until its time to quit it

[1:00]  
Filling up that bouncy house- 
Yep! Starting up the barbeque
My woman's donning a nice blouse
She's gonna be a nice view

No time for a nuisance
No need to get crabby
Time for us to groove it
 We'll play a little Shaggy

Play it low
Or play it loud
Get on that trumpet
Help us bump it!

[1:20  trumpet solo]

[1:47 Shaggy ] 
Buuuut
 who havin' your back when its all done? 
Try so hard when you be little, 
Gotta ask, what's gonna happen in the long run. 
Some friends you just cant help say bye to
Even some family have a bittersweet run too
Gotta invest with the time you have, son
Don't blow the time with short time vibes, huh
Remember you need to slow down
And always show love now
Give hugs, hold hands, be fun, 
Know you can't have too much public affection. 
No worries, its ok to be shy
Be yourself but give yourself time to try too

[ 2:10: HEY-yo & Shaggy]  hey, Yo. 
Filling up that bouncy house- 
Yep! Starting up the barbeque
My woman's donning a nice blouse
She's gonna be a nice view

No time for a nuisance
No need to get crabby
Time for us to groove it
 We'll play a little Shaggy

Play it low
Or play it loud
Get on that trumpet
Help us bump it!

[2:26 enjoy music, no more lyrics]