Rap Battle 11

The primary issue with the majority of Dudz's rap lines is that he attempts to cram too much content into one line i.e. "Crazy lazy stuck being dazy, fake feelings like Drake emotions of sins making you glitch" Also, a lot of his lines are difficult to understand i.e. "Personification is what you preach" and often his word choice makes little sense i.e. "going on a rampage of pure tragedy". In general, his lines do not always rhyme i.e. "I'm a legend on Toonami crashing down like a Tsunami feeling like Johnny Bravo. Cracking critics like sticks smashing and hard lashing on your lard, PETA mad at the pro though". His flow is okay but that's not too difficult to do accapella.

He most certainly didn't perform poorly and had some good lines such as:

"King Matador gonna score smiling at my kill for a thrill cause your chopped liver
Sinister rhymes make your enzymes rumble for a sliver of being a winner
Denying allegations like nations on a war crime, causing gore everytime
Try hard scarred by greatness on a daily basis putting up fuss bumping threads just to chime
Valedictorian, your a has been looking for attention to bring without an invite
I ignite passion, you ignite mansions, crazy arsonist who too scared to fight"

RM started off poorly with a very cringy line "I'm the dude that makes the ladies wanna read my fanfic, and the gentlemen to hold my beer," and a bad flow, but ultimately, his rhyme schemes give him an opportunity to spit a bunch of highlights, i.e. this per his round 2:

"Am I liver? Am I lard? Cannibalism in your veins, snitch, you the type to rip up the parking ticket and get your mother jailed for not payin' it,
Showin' off how you prey on your own aint really sayin' shit, only preyin' here's your whinin' vs Goliath but you aint David, you aint savin' shit,
I'm gon' show what a god is, aint no heaven, fuck a haven, this holy father of the house'll turns your whole family Pagan,
Education, destination, African and Asian, type some random words that rhyme and spit some flow dry like a raisin,
I'm Poseiden making waves here, unrest in this ocean's basin, If ocean waves were muscle moves you're a fasciculation,
Never ever call my knowledge something close to fantasised fascination,
You were taught you stood a chance, but your opponent aint some mumble rapper workin' for freemasons,
You're a sinner to this God, petty demon to this Satan, you came, you saw, wrote nonsense, now don't test my fucking patience."

This honestly wins the battle by itself due to being just really good and also better than everything else in the battle. Also this is decent:

"Nothing you said even dissed me, I can't say it missed me 'cause the aim clearly was to simply talk 'bout how you want to be better than me so fiercely,
The issue with the rap is the itty bitty fact that just like an 'anomaly' isn't the thing that an 'anomaly' deviates from, the entirety of your Round 1 was merely a series of nonsense where you can keep in tact your conscience 'cause if explosions were puns, you're an annual relic, firing super dudz on a real G, yearly."

His R3 is also very impressive despite ending on a low note (doesn't really rhyme). The flow is iffy but is great when it's good.

Ultimately, my reflections would go as follows: I encourage SupaDudz to continue to be lyrical and go for lyrics with good content rather than good flow or good speed as he is doing (he can facilitate this by listening to truly artistic rappers ala Kendrick Lamar, Earl Sweatshirt, Joey Badass, MF DOOM, etc.) but the phase he's currently in is a bad style where his lines are too packed and his meanings too obscure. I really encourage him to build on this foundation as I was there too; thinking that lyrics which sounded difficult to understand would make me an intelligent rapper, but you have to ascend to making truly clever and thoughtful lyrics. So basically: great job, don't stick with what you're doing now but go in that general direction.

As for RM you didn't have the greatest performance on here but you have clever rhyme schemes, fun imagery, and a truly fleshed out (though not to my taste) style which SupaDudz does not have yet. You also have some real highlight verses which I personally look for in judging rap; you went off at some points. This is enough to grant you a win. Great job to both battlers!