#death note

Anyone can criticise and judge, not anyone can outdo.

I wish to showcase how I would have done Pro's Round 1. This isn't about an ego trip, it's about showing that I am not just degrading and criticising without knowing what could be done instead, lacking the flaws.

Learn. Improve.

I just want you to know, you're already dead,

No, I know you died already but I've written what you've said,

You're a zombie on a clock, and if you're not yet filled with dread, let me clarify, this entire rap battle is a path my writing led,

You can talk about your grandiose suicide plans, text me while in bed,

I'll listen and seduce you, write a text back in my death note as you wait desperate, left on read.

You think you're a mastermind or something,

You're a narcissistic sociopath, I'm your psychopath cousin,

Trust me, fuck off with the fronting,

You're just bitter, angry, longing for the day your revenge cures you of your perpetual state of wanting,

I kill to rid the world of evil, free demons from haunting,

You kill children just to prove a point, left on read there's no responding.

You're jealous of the royalty so you take it on yourself to be a hitman,

"My peasant family's poor so spoil me!" you shriek, little hitboy, just a kid, damn,

I guess you had a point killing youngsters, round your neck I've gripped with athletic hands,

I play tennis, run and more, you're just a chess nerd, skinny stickman.