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Topic
#1049

Rap Battle Part 2

Status
Finished

The debate is finished. The distribution of the voting points and the winner are presented below.

Winner & statistics
Better arguments
6
9
Better sources
4
6
Better legibility
2
4
Better conduct
2
3

After 4 votes and with 8 points ahead, the winner is...

RationalMadman
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Parameters
Publication date
Last updated date
Type
Standard
Number of rounds
5
Time for argument
Three days
Max argument characters
10,000
Voting period
One month
Point system
Multiple criterions
Voting system
Open
Contender / Con
22
1687
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555
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Description

I stated that I will not do another rap battle on here because of poor voting, but I will try this again in hopes that it will go well this time. The best of luck to my opponent.

***Rules for my opponent***
Spit 16 bars for each round. It's okay if it is a little more or a little less but try your best to make it at least 16. You must have 4 bar setups. If you are using bars you have used previously, then please source where it came from. It must be your bars, no one else's and no plagiarism. This rap battle will be judged off of 4 criteria: Rhymes, flow, syllabic pattern, and creativity.

Rhymes - Who had better and more rhymes.
Flow - Who had better flow.
Syllabic pattern - When the syllables are perfectly in sync each line, especially the last word of each bar.
Creativity - Which opponent had more creative bars.

***Rules for voters***
Since this is a rap battle, I'd like to take a different approach and make the judging more accurate and fair. As I've said before, 4 of each criteria will be voted for. You must vote in this fashion below:
Arguments - Better Rhymes.
Sources - Better Flow.
Spelling & Grammar - Better Syllabic pattern.
Conduct - Which opponent was more creative.

No bias votes please.

I will explain my bars in the comments if need be, so the voters (and perhaps my opponent) can understand them.

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@David
@bsh1

if freud asks to have his vote removed, ramshutu countered his vote in how he allocated points so please ensure both are redone.

club is still a votebomb.

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Moderation Notice: Self-voting through alt accounts is strictly prohibited in all circumstances. TheGreatGameLord's vote has therefore been removed.

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Note: this is a competition style debate and as such votes on this debate will not be moderated
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@Pinkfreud08
@King_8

parts of the battle, how? I read the whole battle. poor analysis? coming from a guy who counter voted who didnt actually vote. well alright two can play. I'm counter voting against you now

Lol king hes dumb

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@TheGreatGameLord

@Pinkfreud

Your votes for my battles are either "tied" (bs), vote against me knowing I won, or countering someone else's vote just to be problematic. Do me a favor and not even vote on anymore of my rap battles, it's annoying. If you aren't going to be a serious voter for something I work hard on, then simply don't engage. In the other rap battle I was in, you put "Bite my shiny metal ass" as your reasoning...talk about "very poor analysis". Keep on trying me and this same thing will continue happening and you will get checked.

All you could have done is vote on this with your own mind, as in -- let me explain this clearly so you can understand: How would your vote be if you didn't counter vote? By choosing which one of us rapped better in your opinion. Just because you disagree with a vote per se, it's not fair to counter it. Unless you actually thought RationalMadman won, which is unknown. Regardless, it doesn't matter. A person with common sense will vote THEIR opinions, not "countervote" from someone else's vote which is somehow unfair in their opinion, when that vote was fair. You did not follow my voting criteria that's laid out in my description, therefore your vote is deemed insufficient and invalid. GameLord's vote was fair, and I'm not saying that just because they voted in my favor. He complimented both of us on our bars.

vote

vote

Please vote guys!

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@King_8

Ok, I gotchu when I get home

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@Speedrace

Oh ok bet

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@David

Lol thanks genie

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@Speedrace

Your wish is my command. Done

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@David

Will you delete my vote please?

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@King_8

I like you WAY more than RM dude lol it’s not bias, it’s just a thing where we try to have people actually put effort into their votes

But how about this, I’ll delete it and counter vote with the arguments but with my opinion in the other categories

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@Speedrace

@RM

That is not right to ask people to counter vote someone just because they voted for me. Please be a good sport. Club's vote was decent, although it should have been more concrete because he had everything else tied. Unless he genuinely think he tied on the rest of the criteria. Also, the people you're @ing, are you seeking bias votes or something? Lol

@Speedrace

Instead of counter voting you should have used the voting criteria that's in the description. Would have been something to look forward to. I don't know if mods will delete your vote, but I would be very surprised if they didn't, coming from the fact that my votes (no matter how fair and accurate they are) they get deleted. If you stand by your vote, so be it. My question is are you doing the counter vote bomb for yourself because that is what your decision is and that's how you feel or are you just doing it for Madman? -- Whatever your vote is, thanks for reading the rap battle hope you enjoyed it

Anyways, as RM said highlight the bars you like the most, everyone. (that includes both of our bars)

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@RationalMadman

I gotchuuuu, no need to be snarky lol, plus this way I don’t have to vote

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@Ramshutu

Will you counter votebomb Club? or is that not on your agenda?

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@K_Michael
@Speedrace

Will appreciate a vote from both. Please highlight the bars you liked most.

-Explaining R5 Bar-

For the people who didn't catch it.

In response to Con's "Your flesh is tasty, flavoured butthurt-peppermint.//"
I said: "You say I'm a peppermint, but you won't take my stride"
1. Won't take my stride as in you won't take my skills.
2. Stride is a gum brand. Peppermint is the flavor of gum. They are connected.

-Explaining R4 Bars-

You ain't with the racket what you think this 10 is for? (10 is/tennis)
1. You ain't with the smoke (racket) what you think this 10 is for? A 10 is a gun. (10mm)
2. 10 is = tennis. Racket connects with tennis. Tennis racket.

So bring your friends I'll leak them, no expose
1. Leak = punch.
2. Leak means expose or put out. That explains the "no expose"

I'm cold man, that's Different Strokes (cold man/coleman)
1. I'm cold (cold = awesome)
2. cold man = coleman. Gary Coleman was on the show Different Strokes.

-Explaining R3 Bar-

You got presence but I don't need that cause I'm already gifted
Wordplay/Double ent. ~ presence/presents.
Presents and gift are the same thing.
1. I'm talented enough with just bars, I don't need anything else (gifted) I can do without presence.
2. I'm already gifted, I don't need presents, in other words I have gifts. Metaphor.

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@RationalMadman
@King_8

Lol

@RationalMadman
Thanks for telling him I appreciate it

@rationalmadman
please look at this debate

RationalMadman

Please respond in this debate and don't forfeit. I worked hard making this and I don't want it to go to waste. Whoever sees this comment, mention Con's name and tell him to look at my comment, as we both have eachother blocked.

-Explaining R1 Bars-

I paint a picture when I rap, people say it's like an art show | Displaying my creativity.

So I ain't talking razors when I graze him with this Quattro | Quattro is a razor brand.

I already smoked you in one round; watch me blow | Double entendre.

1) Smoked you in one round = beat you in round 1
Watch me blow = watch me keep winning

2) Smoked/one round = Smoking an O from a cigar
Watch me blow = Blowing the O

Metal round on your wrist, but it's not a charm | Shooting a metal bullet at his wrist. ** Metal charms are usually worn on wrists.

Pounds on my hip and I ain't talking about a calorie | Pounds on my hip = Gun and hostler on my hip. The gun weighs a lot. ** Pounds on my hip = calories. Weight on the hips.

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@K_Michael

I see. It's fine, I hope you enjoy the battle!

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@King_8

I would accept but my syllabic patterns aren't so good.