Instigator / Pro
14
1476
rating
16
debates
40.63%
won
Topic
#1049

Rap Battle Part 2

Status
Finished

The debate is finished. The distribution of the voting points and the winner are presented below.

Winner & statistics
Better arguments
6
9
Better sources
4
6
Better legibility
2
4
Better conduct
2
3

After 4 votes and with 8 points ahead, the winner is...

RationalMadman
Tags
Parameters
Publication date
Last updated date
Type
Standard
Number of rounds
5
Time for argument
Three days
Max argument characters
10,000
Voting period
One month
Point system
Multiple criterions
Voting system
Open
Contender / Con
22
1697
rating
556
debates
68.17%
won
Description

I stated that I will not do another rap battle on here because of poor voting, but I will try this again in hopes that it will go well this time. The best of luck to my opponent.

***Rules for my opponent***
Spit 16 bars for each round. It's okay if it is a little more or a little less but try your best to make it at least 16. You must have 4 bar setups. If you are using bars you have used previously, then please source where it came from. It must be your bars, no one else's and no plagiarism. This rap battle will be judged off of 4 criteria: Rhymes, flow, syllabic pattern, and creativity.

Rhymes - Who had better and more rhymes.
Flow - Who had better flow.
Syllabic pattern - When the syllables are perfectly in sync each line, especially the last word of each bar.
Creativity - Which opponent had more creative bars.

***Rules for voters***
Since this is a rap battle, I'd like to take a different approach and make the judging more accurate and fair. As I've said before, 4 of each criteria will be voted for. You must vote in this fashion below:
Arguments - Better Rhymes.
Sources - Better Flow.
Spelling & Grammar - Better Syllabic pattern.
Conduct - Which opponent was more creative.

No bias votes please.

I will explain my bars in the comments if need be, so the voters (and perhaps my opponent) can understand them.

Criterion
Pro
Tie
Con
Points
Better arguments
3 point(s)
Better sources
2 point(s)
Better legibility
1 point(s)
Better conduct
1 point(s)
Reason:

I feel as if RM was the better rapper

Criterion
Pro
Tie
Con
Points
Better arguments
3 point(s)
Better sources
2 point(s)
Better legibility
1 point(s)
Better conduct
1 point(s)
Reason:

Half countering Pink Freud’s vote. I thought GGLs vote was fine.

I’m scoring rhymes as a tie; as I would have probably voted either as s tie or for con. Both sides had a number of fizzles of rhymes where they didn’t really stack up (intercom/firearm) (rebel/peasant), com used ever so slightly more complex rhymes, but shot himself in the foot with the last round/sound/pound etc; the rhymes were more Sandra Boynton than Vinnie Paz. So on balance, imo this was a tie.

Criterion
Pro
Tie
Con
Points
Better arguments
3 point(s)
Better sources
2 point(s)
Better legibility
1 point(s)
Better conduct
1 point(s)
Reason:

Countering TheGreatGameLord's vote as it only analyzes very parts of the battle and offers a poor analysis.

Criterion
Pro
Tie
Con
Points
Better arguments
3 point(s)
Better sources
2 point(s)
Better legibility
1 point(s)
Better conduct
1 point(s)
Reason:

I feel as if King_8's word flow was better, and he mainly was "bragging" about himself, not roasting others.