Instigator / Pro
28
1528
rating
11
debates
59.09%
won
Topic
#1475

Freestyle Rap

Status
Finished

The debate is finished. The distribution of the voting points and the winner are presented below.

Winner & statistics
Better arguments
12
9
Better sources
8
6
Better legibility
4
4
Better conduct
4
0

After 4 votes and with 9 points ahead, the winner is...

AvoidDeath
Tags
Parameters
Publication date
Last updated date
Type
Standard
Number of rounds
5
Time for argument
Three days
Max argument characters
10,000
Voting period
One week
Point system
Multiple criterions
Voting system
Open
Contender / Con
19
1512
rating
12
debates
54.17%
won
Description

Best rap. Just rap about anything, feelings, drugs, emotions. Flow, meaning, and rhymes win. NO DISSING.

Criterion
Pro
Tie
Con
Points
Better arguments
3 point(s)
Better sources
2 point(s)
Better legibility
1 point(s)
Better conduct
1 point(s)
Reason:

Water Forfeited last round

Criterion
Pro
Tie
Con
Points
Better arguments
3 point(s)
Better sources
2 point(s)
Better legibility
1 point(s)
Better conduct
1 point(s)
Reason:

I'll grade by this
ARGS: Morality/Puns
SOURCE: Rhymes
S&G: Flow/Scheme
CONDUCT: general conduct

FIRST 3 WILL GRADE ROUND BY ROUND, will be giving a 10 pt scale based of the content
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R1 AD
ARGS: 8. I like the theme here. Generic and basic, but it is still a good theme to talk with a edgy twist to it, it works here and i like it overall
SOURCE: 3. Yes, it is a freestyle, but I need better rhymes. Some words did not rhyme, like nuts and choc-lates. need to improve
SG: 5. Choppy flow but good flow at some points. Could be improved, but not the costliest thing
16/30 R1

R1 WP
ARGS: 6. It was too short for as a counter. It needed more to it and I think there was. Great premise and some great deep rhetoric, but I needed some more beef to a rebuttal
SOURCE: 6. An attempt to rhyme was made here. It was one syllable words, but basic enough to get decent points
SG: 5. It is hard to award more than 5 to that. The flow was beautiful, but anyone could make an amazing to flow stanza
17/30 R1

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R2 AD

ARGS: 9. Another deep and creative verse for theming here. I LOVE THE PUNS MADE HERE TOO AND THE REFRENCES. Extremely clever
SOURCE: 7.5. Multisylabic rhymes are key here and this flow takes the cake. Since it is a freestyle, I give more attempt to credit the inner verse rhymes, but more di/trisylabic rhymes would be amazing
SG: 6. Flow is still choppy, but it is slightly better with good flowing ones. Again, I can't see myself awarding more than 6 for 2 line bars
22.5/30

R2 WP

ARGS: 2. Yawwwnnnn. Boring. Not enough puns, too much of a basic top about family, just plain boring
SOURCE: 6. One syllable boring rhymes again, cmon now
SG: 6. I can't give more than a 7 for the flow here, but it was very good.
14/30

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R3 AD

ARGS: 1. Disorganized, broad topic, and hard for me to focus on a central theme. No real clever pun and wordplay in here that catches my eye, and is just a WTF momet
SOURCE: 8. Great rhyming again with good rhetoric and great rhyming words. That was pretty good again. I liked the rhymes
SG: 7. great overall flow, but its 2 line stanzas, can't give more than a 7 here, but if more lines were done, this would have been a 10
16/30

R3 WP
ARGS: 6. The clapback is nice, its sassy and classy. I like it. I wish you could have done more with it but, oh well.
SOURCE: 6. Ehhh, ehhh, ehhh. I'll give it a 6. It had some attempt at complex rhyming words, but it doesn't go deep
SG. 5 Nothing special at all really, it was just average at best... i didn't find it thrilling, nor detrimental
17/30

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R4 AD:
ARGS: 7. Emotions getting repetitive now. I like how u go Drake feelings, but you need to go deeper. I love the wordplay, and that is your score saver
SOURCE:. 4. NO NO NO, that is not good. 2 lines did not rhyme and the rhyme scheming did not match
SG: 4. NO NO. STOP THE CHOPPY FLOWS. IT IS NOT GOOD, NO NO NO
15/30

R4: WP
ARGS. 0. Now it is a copy pasta turned positive with no originality to it. Yea I am not a fan
SOURCE: 6. An attempt at rhyme scheming is made, but it is ok
SG: 4. I do not like it's quick burst to slow burst feel. I just don't at all, it is confusing nonsense
10/30
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R5. Concession. So giving conduct to PRO

VERDICT

ARGS: AD
SOURCE: AD
SG: TIE
CONDUCT: AD

WINNER: AvoidDeath. May leave a few comments so check for reply

Criterion
Pro
Tie
Con
Points
Better arguments
3 point(s)
Better sources
2 point(s)
Better legibility
1 point(s)
Better conduct
1 point(s)
Reason:

More poetry slam than rap freestyle; but to be honest, other than the forfeit there was little to separate both sides; as a poetry, but rhymed pretty well and set forth a good emotional narrative, without disses I don’t have a good clear benchmark that sets one above the other; thus I am going against the forfeit.

Criterion
Pro
Tie
Con
Points
Better arguments
3 point(s)
Better sources
2 point(s)
Better legibility
1 point(s)
Better conduct
1 point(s)
Reason:

I don’t really trade these as arguments, but...
Conduct for missed round.