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21pilotsfaggots blocked me so i have to hunt him down with a dedicated post. 
The post goes like this: 21pilots is a faggot. 
I am sure he is on it right now! 

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I liked the one about plums and did one myself. 
Falls short in many aspects tho.
I will explain.

"This is just to say about the cherries"- Umbrellacorp

I picked
the cherries
too early
from the bowl
they were
still sour
and I swallowed
them anyway
I thought
of you
watching
from the hallway

Where this poem falls short:

The plum poem describes the honest kind of greed. Eats the plums without remorse. Delicious. Apologizes later. Feels sorry for having taken something someone was saving. Describes pure guilt. It has a very gentle tone. 

This however, is unapologetic. Only the act of taking something before it is given. "They were still sour". "Too early". Then, the tension of being seen. Someone else watches but says nothing. DEFIANCE.

Of course i did not intend it to be so, but after thinking why it wasn't so good as the plum poem i noticed it lacked innocence or honesty. 
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Liberté (excerpt) — Paul Éluard

Sur mes cahiers d’écolier
Sur mon pupitre et les arbres
Sur le sable sur la neige
J’écris ton nom
Liberté


I like french. Plus nice poem. Plus liberty. Plus french. 
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Fuck morning shift btw!
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"Resume"
by Dorothy Parker

Razors pain you;
Rivers are damp;
Acids stain you;
And drugs cause cramp.
Guns aren’t lawful;
Nooses give;
Gas smells awful;
You might as well live.

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What the hell is marvel even about. 
When they first started with the iron man it was enjoyable. Science-fiction, philanthropic super-hero.
They made a couple good movies after that and then it quickly went downhill.
From science-fiction to fantasy to fuck all. JUST IN 2-3 movies. 
Cgi is not film. 
Great marketing tho.
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"This Is Just To Say" – William Carlos Williams

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold


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Who even listens to that?
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Cool fighter jet
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Economics
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She is lovely! 
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Society
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Donkey
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Society
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To promote inclusion for orange and disabled people. That is lovely indeed and the american people are also lovely for voting him.
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Politics
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And its 8 seasons?!?!?!?!?! Of bullshit?!?!?!?!?
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Just asking.
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Society
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Real talk.
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Politics
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It got pretty famous after lynch's death. Absolute failure as a film.
I posted this as a debate before.
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In the long run, life increases earth's overall entropy.
Even though life might cause earth to carry energy for a longer time, in the end, the total entropy of our planet will be greater.
Considering early earth had all the conditions and complexity for the emergence of aminoacids and other DNA/RNA components (Proven by experiments).
Systems tend toward higher entropy states (One of the fundamental laws of thermodynamics). That might explain the forementioned.
Most famous experiment:
We might be nothing but an instrument to increase earth's total entropy.
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